Goldenking
heres the thing. Ur MC isnt evil, nor a villian, he isnt even a sociopath or anything like that. he just seems like a cunt that kills people for no reason. and thats what he does. if ur plan was to create an evil MC , u might;ve failed cause theres no purpose behind the MC and no past that justifies why he became like that I mean he just kills people cause some one else did it and he wants to do the same cause he thought it was cool, his life was perfect and even the way he kills people isnt fascinating or intelligent or something. like planning/execution [ not the killing ] whats the sense in this. a reader cant relate to this. give a fked up past or atleast a proper motive or something cause, as it is, ur MC is neither likable or relatable. And reading about a ad.ult person in a kids body killing other children for no reason is just wrong and stupid.
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it would be 5 stars if the author did not forget things (which breaks immersion and makes you angry), he says on the train, that the guy has magic at the level of a second year, then he hunts many monsters and the magic is incredible increase to the level of the second year. in my opinion, he already nerfs, the protagonist's power killing an ***** magician and thus receiving half the power of a first year, but I understand that it would make him a lot of op. plan your romance right, the moment I read the second year level again, I wanted Droped
Honestly this is an amazing story, a bit fast paced but thats understandable, he wasnt doing all that much and rhe important parts are explained. Good grammar except for a few areas where its easy to see auto-correct being its usual annoying self. The character is interesting, not the usual "emotionless" psycho that kills for the thrill of killing. The magic is rather interesting, he doesnt care about light or dark but just doesn't use dark because of the consequences. Overall a good story I certainly want to see more of.