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This story gives me goosebumps. But I can say that this story is fantastic in the way how the princess wants to get revenge for her mother who got sick and killed. The way her father did nothing to help her mother and to become a warrior. It was totally hyped my attention. Good job author. keep it up the good work! 😊
Very intriguing opening. I like how the backstory of the Male lead is still largely shrouded in mystery. The Female lead is an interesting character too with a tragic backstory and old demons that have yet to leave her. The prose is well written, despite the odd typo. Pacing is good, jumping between leads from chapter to chapter. At first this was a little confusing but once I understood the pattern it was fine. Interesting new take on the Vampire genre that I have yet to come across so far. Enjoyable reading.
The story seems to be very nice from the first few chapters. The plot is different from usual ones and seems the story will bring many turns and twists and will unfold a good storyline later. The behaviour of winters father is rather unusual and heartbreaking and though it is very early to say but it seems raine will fall in love with This beauty from the sky. Her powers may become a problem for her if revealed, will raine be able to control himself from taking advantage of her powers? How will she get her revenge and will she ever be able to go back to her country. Looking forward for the next chapters. The story is great Language can be better But plot is awesome. Please post more frequently author. Waiting for the next chapters and early updates. I recommend this book for everyone who loves fantasy with a difference.