Reviews of The Awakening
The Awakening
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- Character Design
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Great writing, interesting plot, mysterious vibe. What more do you want? The more you read, the more intriguing you become. Not to say, most of the chapters ending are full of cliffhanger, which makes you want to read more. I recommend this book to everyone. Just try it, you won't regret reading it.
Hello author! First of all, I want to praise you for the superb characters' portrayal, detailed body language, and emotional descriptions. It was nicely crafted, I applaud you for that. But I may have a slight issue with regards to your story pacing, just a bit. I think it's too fast, leaving some gaps in the story here and there. It's not a bad thing, I assure you, it's just that I got lost between parts. Like, in the initial chapter she said she's alone and then someone came in? Then these two people appeared, I think you provide an explanation on what's their relationship but it hasn't sunk into me yet since it's not highlighted too well. Like some important parts that answered the question "why are they in that situation?" is not elaborated well. She was treated badly at first, and it sounds like she hates him, and then in the next chapter, she actually likes him? Yeah, you got me lost on that part. But other than that, you're story was superbly great. You describe your characters so well, I can picture them out vividly. And it's an awesome thing. You did a great job with this story author! It's mind-blowingly cool! Keep up the good work!
Your writing skills is awesome how you narrate the background of your story and also the character's image it really creates a fascinating plot. When I was reading your story in the first chapter of your book you nailed it and I'm impress of how you made this plot. I would love to read your story again!đ
I am not going to review negatively your work because this story has a great plot, presents a quite nice concept. The main thing that concerns me is the fact that the story presents some big grammatical errors, which can be corrected easily by using Grammarly ( I have observed that English is not your main language by the thing you have done to the letter i). Also. The plot is quite lovely and the fact that you use multiple main characters thing is good.
I'm not usually the type to read romance novels, but here I am, writing a review for one. This book was able to draw me in with it's interesting title. No complaints about writing quality, except for slight punctuation errors here and there in dialogue. That is just formatting though, so there's no need to worry about that. Story development is great, I was able to immerse myself in the world of this novel and really follow along with the plot nicely with its perfect pace. Character design is detailed and unique for each of the characters in this novel - something I can appreciate. The world background could use some work, but this novel isn't too focused on that, so this is something extremely minor. Overall, this was a great read so far, and I'm looking forward to more chapters. Keep it up, author-san!
