Reviews of Dare to Fall

It was a promising story. I have to give you credit on that. But there were some grammatical erros such as typos and tenses which can be solved easily later on. Keep on writing and reading other author's works to inspire you also. :)

it's a good story, but there are some typos and tenses and repetitions that are reducing the flow of the story. but those can be fixed with a little more attention and work. good job auther and good luck

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Interesting plot and I can say the story has potential. There are some grammar issues like misplaced or missing punctuations and sentence structure. So it disrupts the reading flow. I suggest Author use Grammarly. It is a good tool for editing that can correct such basic mistakes. Keep it up Author! ☺️👍 Your story is going good.