Danmachi: Reincarnation With System

Its a bit too childish for my taste, but otherwise it's not bad.

Sigue la historia completa coloca que piensan lo demás de El no abandones la historia es muy buena la historia sigue muy buena la historia 😃😃👍👍👏👏👍👍👏👏👍👍👏👏👍👍👏👏

Good to read 😜☺️ I don't have much else to say✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️

what can I say about this ff, it sucks, I tried to read up to 41 chapters despite being disgusted by this ff and the main character almost threw up from this ff

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it's really good since you know how to adapt it correctly and I really hope you follow it ------------------------------------------------------------------------------

To much unnecessary dialog and the mc acting like a experienced playboy too kinky ..................................................................................................................

when is the new chapter when is the new chapter when is the new chapter when is the new chapter when is the new chapter when is the new chapter when is the new chapter when is the new chapter when is the new chapter

did you stop writing this novel ?

Sería bueno que creará una magia como de un héroe o una habilidad de un héroe es muy buena la historia me gusta sigue así 👌 me encanta sigue así por favor que ais y lefiya estén en el harem son las mejores

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I just hope I don't drop this just waiting for at least 50 chap before reading 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Ok, i understand whats going on =P. Author/Translator took a Chinese novel of damnachi as a template to this one and is modifying the story to suits his taste... Since Chinese do that all the time, i support you lol. So i hope you can at least add some originality of yours in this novel.

I don't know who copied who , the first 10 or so chapters I have read are exactly the same as a chinese fanfiction novel I have read a few days ago 😅

Fillers, fillers and fillers! The way the fanfic is written is like one of those Chinese mtls where the authors try to fill the word count. The plot is whimsical and lackadaisical, with the author writing everything to their convenient way. Otherwise, there are no glaring flaws and negatives. In fact, I can even say that the fanfic is 'good' but the author clearly needs to think things through and try to make some sense.

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I really like this fanfiction it's interesting and fun to read sadly webnovel has forced us readers/author alike out of the site because of the force app download, I hope I see more when webnovel is fixed or you have moved out on a new platform.

I must say it's hard to find a good fanfiction of DanMachi. For the moment, this one is good. But it's only the beginning, i hope the autor won't dissapoint me.