Fishball_22
The author, I only has access with the anime version of this story and not manga nor light nove so the information I got might be limited. I'm telling this to avoid any confusion that may arise in the future. Though I'm encouraging the manga readers and light novel readers out there to do tell me in case you find any misinformation here.
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This novel is pretty good. The characters aren't one dimensional and quite flesh out. It's better than most danmachi story out there since the personality of the characters stays faithful to the original. The only problem is the rare occasion where there are some typos, like threw becomes three, or some small typos. It doesn't break the flow of the story but I suggest the author put the chapters through Grammarly to fix these mistakes. Good story, I hope you don't drop
Meh. MC has memories of various skilled people from blacksmith to swordsman, he has em all. His personality is a farcry from the naΓ―ve and heroic bell, he's a bit of a wishy washy ass hat. He's considerate(?) of his goddess and some people close to him, but I can't tell if he's doing it for the sake of the canon, or for the poon. Grammar and spelling needs major help. It's a bit boring but there's only a few chapters out at this point of time, with a bit of polishing the author could make this fanfiction a 4 star.
An average DanMachi power fantasy. It's slow paced, and so far, has stuck to the rails a bit, despite the SI having meta knowledge. Yes, he's OP, but he's focusing on tasks instead of girls, which is a shame for a story tagged as "harem". It's not a harem if the MC is acting like a beta not really doing anything with the girls interested in him.
The story is quite interesting, but unfortunately I don't like "mc" as a bell, it's very boring, There are many interesting characters in Danmachi besides Bell, I mean too boring to act as MC as the protagonist of the original story, why don't you create a new story and take Welf's body as MC, (google translate)
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wondered why am I wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked )
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