Reviews of Dandelion Lover - Taken Down

This is really a very lovely, realistic love story. I like the details of the romantic scenes. Hope there's more... serious ones. haha. ( if you know what I mean). Author, your writing is wonderful. I love your word choices and the way you write. Took a few notes on some myself. Hope you can update this story, seems like your fans are looking forward for some updates.

Well it's been months since this was updated and even longer when the author asked for a review but here it is. (better late than never?) Personally, it's just not the type of story I'm interested in, so I tried not to let that influence this reading and review. I think there's a lot of good points and themes the author was trying for, Much approved of getting out of toxic relationships and character growth from who you are to something more I just didn't see it here. I get the point, but story-wise it wasn't delivered. Overall it read like an office drama? Some parts were realistic yes but like....at most 30% at most? It's fine we're not reading for business accuracy. It's just too stiff to be believable. A little too puppet and lines. A lot like a highschool drama instead of ***** issues? Sure we got some divorcees and supposed company drama but it felt...fluffed up? English wise it gets a lot better over time as chapters go on, less long winded boring details. But I still can't get into the characters let alone the main 'couple'. That's the deal breaker for me. The whole time I was trying to get into them but I just felt nothing. I don't see why they're into each other at all except maybe how the ML is emotionall vulnerable and has some infantilization fetish for the sweet 'vanilla' scented FL. The supposed steamy scenes also didn't interest me, couldn't get into them at all. Sometimes it made sense bc you can't alwasy explain attraction and other times it was just "Well where did that come from?". I appreciate the author trying to buid before getting all into it. They both were written with a lot of room for character development and I like how to FL was this meek insecure woman who was trying to climb up and find herself. Again I just didn't see it delivered. A of potential in different areas was hinted but they fell short.

THE cover attracted me first. Then, I started reading ;) I love the start, the MC and the heating up romance btw ML and MC. It's interesting being in the MC's head. The writer has displayed an tremendous command on first-person POV. Loving the novel.

Although the first chapter is quite misleading in the sense that it makes it seem like not a good book, it gets better the more you read it. I would recommend the readers to give this book a chance. The plot is not typical. Author does have issues of mixing past and present tense but it's better the more you read as Author improves. I like this book and will keep it in my library ❤️

Hai! I wanna say that your story is great! Keep up with the good work author! 😊 Btw I make a story too and it would be kind of u if u can check it out and give some reviews and stars in there too 😊 My story : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14901475106138705

The writing style is is good. The plot line is on point. I can spotted some grammatical and typographical error here and their but overall this story is interesting for me. Good job author and have a nice day.

The writing style is what captured me in the most. Although few grammatical errors can be spotted, they aren't a complete hindrance. I like the lead character, and the story is quite interesting!

This is a very realistic storyline. It revolves around two characters that intervenes and chances each other's lives. You get what you read. More power, Author. Kudos! xoxo ♥

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Mass release please 😘😘😘😘 and more romance please. Forget about Melanie, get these two lead characters together as soon as possible. I love this story and hoping to read me more.

D story is nice and d characters are amazing, just wen I tot the whole story is about to get interesting.... The story ended. The ending not what I expected .