DANCE OF THE RED PEACOCK

Hi Guys, Thanks to some who stopped by and don't run away again, hahahha, I need a review for my books, at least make this book have its own rates, please help guys. whether it's good or bad need your comment, I hope is not that bad, the author has such a weak heart and so easy to get down, really need your support ^^

Author, You have done a great job. I just finished reading all chaps you have updated. Really into this. So I am waiting for more chaps with lots of love. Great work... And the book cover... That was the coolest one I ever saw.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

nice book, love to read it so far, i love the characters and how the world background described, overall the story itself looka promising, dont kind about the english as long as I understand hahaha, good job thor!

The character development in the story is great. I liked your writing style. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Great work author 👍

The setting up of the world and characters are good, it makes you interested to find out more about Hong Er and Fei Er. I think the writer has more surprises waiting for us as the story continues to unfold. Keep up the good work!

Scene and background description are really good. It is as if you can see and feel what is going on. Characters are well-described. There are some grammatical errors with verbs and tenses. I would also like to recommend not putting sounds coming from objects in quotation marks because that is usually reserved for speech/dialogue. You can just describe the sound in a sentence or phrase. Also, I'm not sure about some of the characters calling themselves in the third person, but that maybe just my preference and does not bother other readers. Please keep up the good work, Author.

This is a very nice novel and a bit different from what I usually read so I think that's why I found it funny and a bit awkward. The world Background, Character Design & Writing Quality are very good.

Well,there's a lot to read,Minor details are explained and I think the character development is well ..and also the background of the characters is explained very well,Wish you best of luck

Even though English is not the writer's main language, it's been written well enough. The story flaw so well and I like the world background which I can imagine. Keep it up!

great (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤( ◜‿◝ )♡(｡♡‿♡｡)(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ it's amazing

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