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Daluo Dalu- The Heart of Eternity (My Version)

Author: DaoistlvsgQ6
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Kehte hain Ki pehli Mohobbat , pehli hi hoti hai ... Aur Saccha Ishq , sirf ek baar hi hota hai ..Pehli Mohobbat ko haar jana aur khud ko uski Maut ka Jimmedaar maan kar ... Usi guilt ke saath jindagi bitaana .... Ek aisa experience hai ... Jis se kabhi koi nahi guzarnaa chaahega ..... Lekin Usne to isi guilt ko apni Zindagi maan liya tha.... Khud ko sabse door kar liya thaa... Lekin, zindagi abhi khatam nahi huyi thi, Koi aisa insaan , uski zindagi me kadam rakhta hai .. Jo use uski hi banaayi huyi kaid se nikaalta hai ... Isi me , vo uski zindagi ban jaata hai ... Ek baar Fir, use Ishq ho jaata hai .... Vo apne guilt se bahar aa raha hota hai ... Fir se Zindagi jeene lagta hai .. Apne liye nahi ... Par apni nayi Zindagi ke liye .. Us ladki ke liye , ab jo uski Zindagi thi. Par ye Zaroori to nahi ... Ki jo aapke dil me chal raha ho , saamne vaale ke bhi ho.. Jisko tum pyaar samajh rahe the , vo koi Maksad ho sakta hai .... Ya fir Sach me vo Pyaar hi tha..Jis Ateet se nikal kar , tum apna aaj savaarnaa chah rahe the .. Vohi aaj , tumhe Tumhaare ateet ki gehraaiyon me dobaara bhej sakta hai ... Ateet khud ko dohra sakta hai ... .............. Sidharth Shukla , Bollywood Industry ka ek bohot badaa naam ... Sabke liye ek idol. Par andar hi andar ghut-ghut ke jeene vaala ... Duniya ke liye Ek hasta hua chehra .. Par khud me ek Zindagi se haara hua Insaan ... Kis Gam me ? Bachpan ka ek aisa hadsaa, jisne use apne Best Friend ... Apne pehle Pyaar se door kar diya tha.. Aur kaun thaa vo pehla Pyaar ?? Hamaari Shehnaaz Gill.....Ab kahan hai vo ?? Kise pata ... Kya vo dobara kabhi milenge ? Ya fir Reh jayegi unki ye Ishq ki dastaan Adhoori ? Kaun hai vo , jo Sidharth ki Zindagi me aakar,dobara pyaar karna sikhayega ... Aur Sidharth ki zindagi ban jayega ?? Kya us Farishte ka bhi maksad Pyaar hi hoga ?? Ya hoga INTEQAAM ?? A love-Hate-Revenge-Regret journey , of Sidharth Shukla and Shehnaaz Gill .... I.e one and only our SidNaaz .... .............. Stay tuned...

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I don't want to live in a Fanfiction!

This is a journey of an unfortunate high schooler who was dragged into a Ridiculous Situation by the System. [Take it or Die.] His life was at stake he have no choice but put up with the System. It sounded simple as first, do some task and act his Role as a character wholeheartedly but what the heck?! He doesn't want to live in a Fanfiction!! Warnings: Cliche things about the Fanfiction Fandoms Note: English isn't my first language. Please expect that there would be wrong grammar, sentences and typos. Slow pace story and the flow of story depends on my mood and inspiration. I'm just a newbie writer and this is the very first fanfiction that I've written here in web novel. I'm sorry if the Story is shitty and other things like that. If you're looking for a decent story, this isn't the Fanfiction for you. Suggestions on how to write a good fanfiction is welcome. I may ended up in the hospital if comments on how I suck on writing fanfiction continues. Well, it was painful for my heart to read but I will bear with writing and try to update everyday. Story clues: Act 1: Harry Potter- 'Surviving' as Ron Weasley Act 2: Naruto- I'm just an Oblivious Civilian.. I'm not seeing Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke so close together and so OP! Act 3: High School Dxd- I don't care what happened... The hell why is there two Protagonist fighting for the Harem?! Act 4: Fairy Tail- Sorry I've never heard of you.. Act 5: Assassination Classroom + (spoiler crossover) - I thought that everything would happen like it was supposed to be but the system pulled a Mafia! Act 6: Swort Art- There was a Random NPC.. Act 7: Fate....

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IJUSTWANTREAD
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ManGanu
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Nice plot story But need more chapter If author want more sprit stone Lol me Dhdusidueidusissiajabsjsowoshwhsjdusududueidodididudhdjdbedudisowjshdudidjdgeudidisidhsjsjsidijsjddjdididuejdjxudjdudusisjsjsjsjsjsududjsjsjsjsj

warcan
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Rildec
RildecLv11Rildec

Grammar is a bit rough but readable. However my main complaint is the mc. He's more like a side character that follows canon. He is a bit weak willed with a convuluted background, his cutesy personality is entertaining at the start but it gets a bit annoying as the story goes on. So far the other characters see him as a naive boy or someone to worry about. This is definitely not a fanfic where the mc is badass. There are also some incorrect story details but author justifies that by saying we can't expect him to remember things he read "hundreds of thousands of years ago" and the only one he could remember clearly is naruto lol. Tldr mc is soft and not badass and story details are messy.

Demonic_Ogre
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srsly no intro....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

ChenXian
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I like this story very much, I find it an interesting idea, and the quality is also extremely great, but I'm a bit on the back foot here, since your last story was also great, but you dropped it, please don't drop this one too, don't pay attention to negative comments and such, the story is yours and yours alone, to do as you would like.

Bala_Prakash
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Hope you don't drop this novel......................??????????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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