Webnovelavatar

Reviews of d3leted

alt

d3leted

ultimate_charizard

  • Overall Rate
  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background

Reviews5

LikedNewest
Morning_Fragrance
Morning_FragranceLv5Morning_Fragrance

The grammar is okay but the overall quality is garbage since chapters only consist of a paragraph or two. Stability of updates is horrendous considering that each chapter has been one or two paragraphs. Story development, I have no words for. How can we get development when at every sentence and chapter there is unexplained things besides a subtle briefing. Character design. Same as story development but referencing to characters. World background. Fanfic. Already made world, can't really screw up. But oddly, I feel like the writer screwed this up.

Dragon_of_Chaos
Dragon_of_ChaosLv4Dragon_of_Chaos

More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

KieraRz
KieraRzLv4KieraRz

XP xpxpxpxpxpxxpxxpxxpxpxpxpxxpxxpxcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpxpcppcpcpcpcpcpcppcpcpcp xpxpxpxpxpxxpxxpxxpxpxpxpxxpxxpxcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpxpcppcpcpcpcpcpcppcpcpcp xpxpxpxpxpxxpxxpxxpxpxpxpxxpxxpxcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpxpcppcpcpcpcpcpcppcpcpcp xpxpxpxpxpxxpxxpxxpxpxpxpxxpxxpxcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpxpcppcpcpcpcpcpcppcpcpcp xpxpxpxpxpxxpxxpxxpxpxpxpxxpxxpxcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpxpcppcpcpcpcpcpcppcpcpcp xpxpxpxpxpxxpxxpxxpxpxpxpxxpxxpxcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpxpcppcpcpcpcpcpcppcpcpcp xpxpxpxpxpxxpxxpxxpxpxpxpxxpxxpxcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpcpxpcppcpcpcpcpcpcppcpcpcp

DaoistBoyToy
DaoistBoyToyLv5DaoistBoyToy

More MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

KieraRz
KieraRzLv4KieraRz

Hope can go other world πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‚πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‚πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‚πŸ˜—πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜—πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‚