Reviews of d3leted
d3leted
ultimate_charizard
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
The grammar is okay but the overall quality is garbage since chapters only consist of a paragraph or two. Stability of updates is horrendous considering that each chapter has been one or two paragraphs. Story development, I have no words for. How can we get development when at every sentence and chapter there is unexplained things besides a subtle briefing. Character design. Same as story development but referencing to characters. World background. Fanfic. Already made world, can't really screw up. But oddly, I feel like the writer screwed this up.
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