So far I'm liking this better than the other Cyberpunk fanfics. Things aren't getting rushed. Hopefully he doesn't go full bio as that'll be really disappointing. That'll be wasting the potential of the cyberpunk setting. Anyway looking forward for more.
just a waste of time, author even justified r@p€ so why would i give it a higher stars.......................................................................................................................... btw what will you do if someone r@p€d your sister or other family members, fall in love with that said r@p¡$t, and that r@p¡$t want to start a family with her?
perfect story perfect fiction, but if you want to write a book, you should write something that society will like or at least accept (of course, you can write what you want, but after all the chapters I've read with enthusiasm and excitement, even the most disgusting creatures can't stomach telling and passing off a topic as if they accidentally hit a man walking on the street!$$%@^@%#^#^ ) unlike your other fictions that I have read with fondness, you managed to make me say that I wish I had never read congratulations, it's a complete disappointment
It was pretty good from where I last left but from what I've seen in the reviews i am very hesitant to touch this or continue reading the other stories anymore. Good bye for now
Is this gonna have another tragic end like Steel Waste or does the mc get's ntred like in Elder Blood? Because no matter how good the writing, my heart can't take that lol
ok Iv read it. and I like what I see. it's a good start.. I think I'll go read that unbounded familiar story.
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as much as I would like to give a very detailed review on how much I love this work, it is unfortunate that it kept me up till around 3 in the morning while I have school to attend today. So, just know it's a great story, and I love it so much that it's not rotting in my saved stories and have actually read it to its most recent chapter. Give it a chance, and you will not regret it.
some weird grape enjoyment fantasy ......
Grape is bad novel bad all bad I don’ like
author has grose stockholm and grape fetish.
I really enjoy the story so far. Like what most review said, the story is rather slow in its build up, but that's fine it catch up rather quickly in the later chapter. This story really dive into the darker side of CP (as it should, it's Night City after all). So, if you are squeamish/had the sensitivity of a snow flake, this story is not for you. The writing can be better, some grammar/diction issue here and there, but much more readable than other stories in this platform. Keep the update coming please
Really good, not gonna spoil. The author did a great job when it comes to the Mc and making him different from his previous mc Michael from Unbound Familiar. From start to finish I see almost no similarities between them. The complexity of the characters are much greater compared to what I'm used to seeing despite short time that has currently gone by. The only character I don't think fits in this world is Ori's father the only character who's name I do not remember. His actions leave me confused considering his situation and the current state of the world. One final thing I noticed is that the main character despite being an original character is rememberable. By that I mean that I know his name, which is something hard to find.in most stories on this site. So much so that the main character's name is simply refered to as "mc". I await to see what you do with this in the future. Congratulations on the new story
I might be slightly late to reading this as I stopped using WebNovel for a while but I wanted to give this fic a try because I enjoyed steel waste, So far I’m over 200 chapters in and the writing quality is excellent and the book is finished so that speaks for the updating frequency, the storylines where interesting but standard for the cyberpunk setting but it seems like some characters only exist for the purpose of perpetuating misery the sister being alive for instance has no real relevance to any plot points, they all could have be done if she was dead she only seems to be alive to be a source of pain and misery or to get rid of another unnecessary character being max’s daughter as she provided little to no real motivation that moved the plot forward or even develop a side plot. There are many plot points with the aforementioned characters that annoy me but I have enjoyed the overall story so far.
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Story was pretty good, the only thing i really hated was the nanites and how they had sentience, but other than that it was good...................................
Bruh.. people stop giving 1 stars reviews wth is your problem
So much work and so little time to apreciate 😮💨
WEEEEEEE..... Don't you thin those thighs are just *Chef Kiss*
the story is interesting if you read their fallout Fan-Fic it has similar notes i have a feeling that its going to end super quickly like the fallout fan fic the mc is a year younger than David from the edgerunners anime and is dating Rebecca, ive seen complaints about the MC's sister staying with her rapist and MC not killing him but if someone was doing their most to save you and others you would likely also fall in love with them no matter their flaws, do i agree with the MC not killing the man. NO i wish he would have died, but ultimately its not a massive problem, after saving his sister they rarely get taked about. R.I.P Six the Raiden(metal gear rising)/Zero(borderlands 2) hybrid