Acehole
The grammar is really bad. I started adding comments, correcting mistakes as I found them, but I ended up commenting on pretty much on all of the paragraphs. Dialogue is "quirky" and doesn't feel natural. I'm guessing its been machine translated or written by a non native speaker. Leaning towards machine translation. Don't know much about the story as I couldn't get past chapter 2. But it has some really abrupt jumps, making it hard to keep track of what's happening. All in all skip this novel. Ain't worth the hassle.
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