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I’ve read the first three chapters, and if you liked Fifty Shades of Gray, then you will most definitely like this book. The meet cue between the two MCs is hilarious and extremely promising. There’s a couple past and present tense hiccups, but other than that I’d say this book is wonderfully written. Well done author! I look forward to updates🔥
It's a crazy read, but I enjoyed it, truthfully, I was really stunned at the stuff it brought to light. A real treat for the senses, this book is sure to be a hit with the kink, and I can personally recommend it to y'all. If you want to see the storyline taken to a level in which you can visualize it well, this is it, the thing you have been waiting for. In total, I would say this is a 4.6-4.8 neat read, and it's quite easy to catch up on as it has just started!
The title lives up to what's happening in the story. I mean it started of normal but then things heated up and became spicy. I just love it! Plus the grammar and the usage of words aren't confusing so I could easily follow the flow of this work. I also love the main character and am hopping that she converts to the dark side hahaha. Good Job author!
A worthy genre and novel. I’ve read the first three chapters, and if you liked Fifty Shades of Gray, then you will most definitely like this book. The meet cue between the two MCs is hilarious and extremely promising. There’s a couple past and present tense hiccups, but other than that I’d say this book is wonderfully written. Well done author! I look forward to updates
I dived right in to 4 chapters and its really good, author! Your line paragraph is very easy to understand and I don't have to be confused about things in your story since they are separated accordingly that made a great shape into your story. You have really great potential, Keep up the good work Author! Kudos to yoU!
The story, the setting, the characters - all feel very real. The writing quality was excellent, as far as I could tell, I can't see how it can be improved further. This is all thanks to the author's attention to the characters' minds. It was very easy to imagine the characters, and their action appeared lifelike. If this genre is your thing, go ahead! Author, keep going!