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Readjusting or wordings

I apologize for the chapters being removed, but I'll be rewetting them to 6000-word specs and below. Please be patient for it will take a few weeks to do. There was a lot a missing data that I did not upload. Also, I needed to fill in some of the plot holes in the story like I did to the first chapter. I'm going to take a few days to re-write and adjust some of the story as it began. I'll post at least two chapters per week until I'm up to where I was before. It was meant to be something mysterious at the start. I just forgot to add the updated writing to it and posted the old written i had on my desktop. I will post later in a week or maybe less, but I do appreciate all comments and will adjust accordingly. Thanks for the ideas too. OHH... the new picture to the story is the suit Alice and Chris made for the girls for protection and that is what it looks like. I'll change and post the one Chris's suit will look like in the future. 

Please be patient, Thank You 

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