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Okay I'm not gonna lie I enjoyed your fanfic because of it's concept. It's something new and have not been done before but your writing leaves a lot to be desired, it's plain and to straight forward and you bulldoze through important events, I thought you'd give extra attention too event's like when he recruits his first ninjas (three uchiha kids and former hot spring Village ninjas ) but no he basically says join me then they magically join him without any reason what so ever but I still believe this has a lot of potential so keep going and try to refine your writing skills -From a brand new fan😁
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It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😁👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. It shame that this story is stopped/hiatus.. Hope author will continue someday.. I like this kind of story (kingdom/village building).. It always interesting to see how MC/Sasaki will make his village prosperity/advanced.. Love your story author san 😁👍😍😍😍