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Commondale, a town with 578,903 souls. A third of them are targeted. Children, the target of the murderer. He has taken in hundreds of children and slaughtered them. A terrible act that needs to be stopped.

"Luis! Get your ass out of bed now, damn it!"

"I'm coming, mom!" Luis yelled from his bed.

"Think we should just get rid of the boy." Luis's father, Micheal said.

"Who the hell would we give him to, Micheal?" Luis could hear his parents arguing from upstairs. "He has no friends and none of our family lives here." His mom said.

"Give him to some random people to make him tough." His dad spoke loud and firm.

Luis jumped out of bed and rushed downstairs to check on the madness. "You don't think you guys are tough enough?" He said.

"Get your ass out the door kid!" His father yelled. Luis tried to stand his ground.

"Anywhere is better than here!" Then Luis vanished out the door without a trace. This was the day that changed everything.

"Hey, Luis!" Screams Aries.

"What do you want Aries?"

"I was reading the wall that surrounds our towns"

"What about the wall? You know I don't find much interest in that." Luis yelled back.

"Oh yeah, forgot about that, sorry Luis."

"Please don't stress it, Aries."

"Trust me I won't," As the two friends walked off to school, Luis couldn't help but wonder, where was his third friend?

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