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Hello! I'm curious about the female lead's background, reminds me of Ning Xi, and the male lead kinda reminds me of Jin Liwei, so it's a plus point :wink. Your writing style was lined with 'on spot ' and no to dilly-dallying. There were minimal errors in terms of grammar and capitalization. I suggest you to hand in some transition words? It will help your book to be flowy! I've only read 6 chapters , so I am not profound with concluding about the story development. Anyways, the story plot was, wow. You made me read it with your own unique style of expressing your story. ( By the way, I would like to advice you in writing the expressions, and the tone of voice for your characters? Minimal but not lacking. But overall, goodies(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤!) There were some parts where I was confused but, then again, I was back on track bbecause, it really was quite intriguing. I am hoping to know more about the female lead Ivy, and Noah! Also, I'm hoping- hoping- to read some spicy love triangle ( if there are ) since Ivy's personality kinda makes everyone be well and open to her. She is a sunny, domineering lady in my eyes adorned with glasses XD. This is a MUST read! I'll look forward to your journey as a writer! (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
This is my second review I am now current to the latest chapter. I really enjoyed this novel because the writing is smoothly done and its a novel you can just sit done and enjoy from being to end in a single sitting. The FL and ML are well characterized along with the plot being exciting and the story only get better with each chapter. The novel is now at 100 plus chapters and the characters are getting really fleshed out especially the FL which makes this a perfect time to start following this story before its too far in the chapter count.
This is such a light hearted reading 🥰🥰 initially I thought it might be dark or clichéd but it's not. It's a very simple love story between people of two different world who accepts each others good and bad sides and love unconditionally. There is not unwanted heartbreak or clichéd plot twist. Even the torturing parts are not gruesome. I believe it's a book anybody can read. It highlights the trust and understanding a couple should have towards each others and their feelings are spoken with action and not in words. I was so much engrossed in this novel that I finished reading this is in less than 20 hours and I'm very happy with this story. I highly recommend this book to be read ❤🧡💛💚💙💜 A kind note to the author: Please to focus on vocabulary especially when it comes to the pronouns 😊
I really liked this story. It was not a long drawn out book. I loved the way Noah and Ivy interacted and the way Ivy treated her friends. Hoping for a future book on Noah and Ivy's children. I can imagine a little Noah protecting a little Ivy and also A big Noah killing any boy coming near his little Ivy. That would be great.
A beautiful story. Though there were grammars and spelling errors here and there, overall stories were well written. Thank you for the lovely read. Had truly enjoyed the journey of Noel and Ivy. Love the brotherhood and loyalties of Aiden, Thomas and Matteo. Loved how protective they had been over Ivy especially Thomas. 🥰