Reviews of Children of Light (Dark World)
Children of Light (Dark World)
Spacewarrior17
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- Character Design
- world background
Nice beginning, and I see your talent to bring out your imagination, just edit the grammar then you'll see how beautiful your story is, keep on your writing and expand this world of yours and take people there with you.[img=recommend]
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I felt you, doing school stuff and writing side by side, experienced it once till now. But I see you gave your best and that's really important things. Anyways back to your story. It has beautiful world, and strong female MC. The plot about ancient battle and fairytale-like creatures but more scary. Overall good, and I believe you'll improve. Just keep writing!
