Tuque
The story has a good path thats has many optional path it could go! Seems like MC going to be doing some early gains in his child hood and I wish to see his age progression gradually over chapters onward... but to many reader that would get tedious for them so if Author could do 1-1# to the beginning! Some highlight reel of family moments and parental shenanigans!
Other then the author being busy with RL (totally understandable) and having somewhat of an inconsistent update and the multiple POVs that are sometimes not needed its fricking amazing! I've been really enjoying the cute and lightweight story of the MC so far and I honestly can't wait for future updates! So far so good author keep up the damn good work
I am the shameless author reviewing his own work. An original web novel that I wrote to improve my skills. I'm an ******* writer. A generic and unique original novel about Hoshi and his second chance at life with a system. He has a dream of becoming a world-famous chef. The chef system will help him reach that goal. Expect foodgasm, generic tropes, long food descriptions and memes. Maybe a harem? lol This novel contains Magic, Comedy, Cooking, Business, System, Second Chance and Game Elements.
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It's pretty much safe to say that its dropped, since he posted an update too him being gone over 2 months ago. If he hasn't even posted 1 chapter in 2 months. Then he prob wont be posting many in the future so don't waste your time, it was an ok story but not enough to really say if it was good or bad yet, for me anyways.