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Checked out Rebellion of youngest, book continued there

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anarchyboi
anarchyboiLv3anarchyboi

let me see how much chapters will you write after converting mysore city into kingdom XD...................................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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holson_Charles
holson_CharlesLv14holson_Charles

5 chapter,, updated 3 month ago.. yeah that’s a drop don’t waste your time...

Webzayne
WebzayneLv11Webzayne

English is clearly competent enough, that grammatical errors are just not acceptable. No excuses honestly. Your level of English is good enough to write a novel but is also bad enough to make the novel frustrating to read. Clearly, an attempt was made, but there are just too many sentences that simply don't work, as well as words that are just wrong. This feels rushed, for whatever reason... You should spend more of your time revising your drafts before you post them. Also, what the hell is up with the names? It's like you cobbled together a bunch of words at random, making some uncomprehensible abominations. Seriously, REVISE, EDIT, REFINE. Overall it's just not appealing or worthwhile to struggle through rn. If you care about your work, that's great. If not, then why are you writing?

border_reader
border_readerLv5border_reader

I really like the feel of this novel at least the first few chapters provide a decent hook. I need more chapters though before I can make a final decision.