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I must say this is one of the stories with a difficult genre to write. Fictional stories that entail law and contemporary issues are difficult to write. This is why I commend the Author for taking up the challenge in writing such story. Please, give this story a chance. It is truly a worth of your time once you read this. Keep it up Author! More Chapters please!
Hi Author! I liked how the story is developing so far and it peeks my interest because of law, and I admire you for choosing this concept because it's pretty hard to write on this without having a little knowledge, so I know you've learned and study on this which is a plus! Great job! Keep up the good work!
I really find this novel interesting. It's rare to see a novel here on this platform that uses a lot of dialogues to keep a plot moving. I can also see the improvement of the author as the story goes on both grammar and word usage wise. Wish the author all the best. Please keep it up. May the author write more, edit more, learn more, and even earn more.
I've always liked law, crime and mysteries! really admire them that knew how to wrote about this difficult genre! Keep it up, author. just a little bit of advice tho: please smoothen the scene transition or put some kind of marks in between because the abrupt change sometimes make me confused but overall the story is very good!
The author possesses the abilities to harbour suspense amongst her readers. Her character development is commendable. The supposed male lead Zavien seems suspicious and she has managed to make me feel that way with her great writing skills. A few grammatical errors, but they manage to stay unnoticed as her overall work keeps you hooked. She has abundant knowledge in the genre and has kept me so curious to read what happens next. Rooting for you! Strongly recommended.
This feels like Nancy Drew if she were a lawyer instead of a nosy kid. Well, it's not really that similar, but I loved those books (and the Hardy Boys) as a kid and this story fills me with an odd nostalgia. To the review! The good: The hook is good, it draws you in and gets you invested. You care about what happens to these characters, the world seems diverse from what we're allowed to see of it, and I like where it's going so far. The bad: Eh, English is a second language here is my guess. Poor word choice here and there, enough to be noticed, but not so bad as to make this excellent story unreadable. With an editor I could see this being a top seller. Overall: I really liked this story and I'll recommend it to any friend interested in crime/drama/mystery.