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The character dialogue is pretty good I can't get the setting but it seems to be in Korea seeing the names of the characters and one place called Itaewon which I saw the show for. It feels like immortals living with each other or something like that, that quality and flow of the first chapter is great and I feel like reading more right after.
Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays, the title is really unique and the cover reeled me in I personally love romance novels! Will be adding this to my reading list. All being said, keep up the good work.
Despite not being much into this type of writing style or genre, I find this to be a somewhat enjoyable story at times, which speaks levels about the quality of the work. The description of everything is really nice, and the plot is actually kind of compelling. Although, sometimes it is very confusing. This could be due to how hard it is for me to focus on things, but sometimes I find myself losing track of which character is which and who exactly is talking, along with where exactly they are at any given moment. The book often switches between time periods and points of view, which doesn’t really help. As a result, many things feel somewhat inconsequential to me. Again, I’m stupid so everything I say here could be very wrong. I do believe the book is still being updated and is not yet complete, so I can’t give my full opinion on the final result. All in all, though I was very critical of it, this story is pretty good. I’m sure many other people will enjoy it more than I do, but I guess it’s not really my thing. Nonetheless, I can respect it for what it is and what the author set out to do. Thank you, and have a good day.
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