SAKIVGARUDA
I've thoroughly enjoyed this story. It's development and continued updates excite me. Its grammar and writing style are decent. It flows well, but wouldn't fit well in a professional writing atmosphere. But, since you are reading novels here, this more personal and *******ish writing style shouldn't be a problem whatsoever. The character development has been somewhat shallow. The characters have generally stayed the same, with the only real character changes occurring in a few traumatized people. The change in one character which involved rape was - in my opinion - distasteful. It was a bit idealistic and a not well described change that could have been written better. But, the novel has since moved on, and my enjoyment has been rekindled. The cultivation system - while often referenced - could be better described. The characters true strength gain are not shown well; neither are the differences between ranks. Still, this doesn't truly hinder the novel. As it's highly consistent and quick chapters are pushed out, the story moves along nicely. The pace starts out has odd and choppy, but soon finds its rhythm. I hope the novel continues to grow in the way it has previously, and look forward to it's future chapters.
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I really enjoy this. Smart MC and few overused cliches. πππππππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»
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Ahh, sigh, should have heeded the aux chapter's warning xD The novel is pretty decent, the plot progresses at a decent pace and the story presents a lot of information at the beginning, unlike other cultivation novels which info dump and expect you to understand everything. The paragraphs are quite messy, it's a bit hard to read, especially with the subpar grammar but those are minor issues, all in all, a good read. Keep it up!
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coughcough... MC came from some super OP family that is going through some trouble so his parents sent him down to a lower realm, which happened to be Beginner's village in classic RPG. MC's new adoptive father hooks him up with villager beauties -> said villager beauties are trash that leeches off MC -> MC is idiot that wastes his time in lower realm instead of grinding EXP
boring trash full of pointless actions... why not grind for exp??? boring trash full of pointless actions... why not grind for exp??? boring trash full of pointless actions... why not grind for exp??? boring trash full of pointless actions... why not grind for exp??? boring trash full of pointless actions... why not grind for exp???
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