This novel warrant a 5 star. I love the book cover and everything about this novel especially the characters. I really love system novels and this novel just made me want to go more. Keep it up
Story is spectacular, The characters are great but nothing exceptional and MC is interesting and doesn't have much plot armor. World is amazing and updates daily. Buttt the more you read the more typos and plot holes there are, Author got the "Getting tired of this story" Disease and I can guarantee it will be dropped without a finish.
This book is decent the only flaw is the author is obsessed with repeated phrases such as, “he’s anything but ordinary” or “Val is unordinary” “Val can see because he has nocturnal vision” like let us make the assumption after you have told us in the past he is this. It makes the book unreadable because all I can focus on now is how every other paragraph you repeate these phrases. The book is good other than that so if you can stomach having to read the same phrase over and over again.
I want more chapters more chapters more chapters
more chapters please more chapters please
I am not usually a big fantasy reader but this novel has changed my mind! it's a true page turner with characters that stay with you. The scheming side of the story is just as fabulous as the adventure part! can't wait for the next chapter . I am addicted to it!
only 19 chap so fat but reading this novel had been a thrilling ride! Val is a character I can't help but root for. every fight is intense
Wow, just wow. I couldn't put this novel down! The characters are so well fleshed out, the world-building is absolutely top-notch, and the plot just keeps you on the edge of your seat. I've already recommended it to all my friends! I highy recommend it!
This story pulls me in from the get-go. The depth of character, the suspenseful plot, and the vibrant world-building left me eagerly awaiting the next installment! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]!!!!
books been dropped. don't waste your time
Pretty good read, however there's alot of inconsistencies with experience gain, the levels, and stats. There's also some sentences and paragraphs that are duplicated while the main characters special trait is repeated almost every half to quarter page.
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Everything aside, the writing itself is so beautiful and inspiring that I want to rate it 5 stars. As for the main protagonist, love his ruthless and cunning character. Hope this doesn't go down the path of harem.
Review at chapter ~115: A bit shorter of a review for people who don't like long reviews, this novel is very good and one of my favorite atm. Only has a couple issues which can be negligible so I highly suggest giving it a try.There is only 1 big flaw that I can see, and it is the author fairly constantly explaining Val's personality in relation to his actions. Every so often would be fine because it re-establishes his goals and thought process, but every few chapters is more than enough. Luckily, this typically only happens for a paragraph or two so I just skim over them and continue to enjoy the story, but I can see that being annoying for some so just some forewarning.
Too much info dumps but otherwise a good novel
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new chapter when? please update this masterpiece.
Great read, I feel at a loss because it wasn't finished.. Please give us more..