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I hate it when people make wish like instant mastery. You know why, because non of the author understand the meaning of instant mastery. They put stuff like working hard but instant mastery you can learn in a flash as long as you fill the requirements. It can also be use on skill like acting, drawing pretty much anything.
This novel is good and got good story flow. But not my cup of tea. Cause MC does nothing and gets everything for free. Like tons of skills and wishes without earning them. It feels like the plot armor killed the novel. @author You should read Reincarnation paradise novel. Everyone has different preference. You guys should read it.
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Grammar is shiat but the story is decent. It'd be a blessing if the Author got Grammarly or an editor or better grammaring skills. Not really much else to say so I'll ramble on about how my life sucks right now - did you know I have suicidal thoughts, or at least did until I discovered the existence of fan fictions and web novels!! Yey~ just putting it out there I'm willing to pay alot for a Pepsi - I recently found I love dat sheet man. Peace - UwU
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