MissTeaPretty
This is an excellent story, with well-written dialogue, fleshed-out characters, and great comedic timing! Best of all, the MC actually experiences character growth in a natural and interesting way! The only thing dragging the novel down is the typos, but once youβre immersed in the story theyβre barely noticeable. So far, itβs a fun, lighthearted, romance-action story, definitely an enjoyable read!
So far, the story is coming out nicely, and I'm enjoying it. (I've always been a fan of fantasy + romance genre, so maybe I'm a little biased.) Overall, I admire the personality of the MC, and I'm looking forward to reading more. I have a problem, however. Truthfully, the grammar pulls the story down. (There are some basic grammar problems which can be adjusted with more writing experience β tense consistency, (sometimes you skip between past and present.), also some basic mistakes which can be corrected by Grammarly. But, over time, this aspect will get better as you write more. Furthermore, the updating stability is really good. You can become an excellent writer once your grammar improves!
This is pretty interesting. I really enjoyed reading the first ten chapters. I might come back, delete this review and write another one when I read more. There are some grammatical errors which I know you are aware of. Take care of the punctuation. You constantly switch between the present and the past tense. That made the read a bit complicated. Please stick to one. Choose if you want to tell your story in the present or the past and then accordingly go ahead. I think this story would do great if you take care of these minor issues. Good luck.
The writing quality of the novel is 3 star for it is very easy to understand and stability of updates 3 star for being able to update fast and story development even though it's a cliche' transmigration Female lead it's still a good start and character design is also good the world background is also good for it is easy to understand their world and overall please read this novel for I believe it is a good one so please writer please update more I support you!
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New concept ion immortal story. At least for me. I like it so far. But what bothers me terribly is the fact that there is no one looking after the transition quality. As usual, this is a binary based gender story, even so, shes are called he, hes are called she. It lacks commas. It is hard to read sometimes. I hope this to be solved by the locked chapters.
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