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Reviews of Center Realm: The Girl and Her Glowing Necklace

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Center Realm: The Girl and Her Glowing Necklace

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Bloom759
Bloom759Lv13Bloom759

Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays, the supernatural(elfs, magical necklaces), the fantasy realm sort of thing It's a nice plot, the going to a different realm synopsis made me think of Alice in wonderland (it so happens it was partly inspired), but you've taken that and brought it into a beautiful story line. The unique names is something I admire. The first chapter "In the vast woods" was filled with thrilling sights, why was Rosettatu running? What was she doing in the woods? Why was she scared of being found out? How did that elf know her name? I hope all these are addressed in the next chapter! I personally love Fantasy novels! I have added this to my reading list! ❤️❤️❤️❤️💓 All being said, keep up the good work.

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Eggy_does_writing
Eggy_does_writingLv2Eggy_does_writing

I've read a couple of chapters and this story is pretty interesting. I liked the vivid descriptions of the surroundings and what the character was experiencing. This story feels like Cinderella except instead of locking her in her room, Cinderella's step family was forcing her to go to the ball and marry an abusive prince. This also feels like The Wizard of Oz except Dorthy never wants to go home to Kansas. I was a little confused at first because the first chapter was talking about a woman named Rosetta while the second chapter was talking about someone named Rose Ann. I initially thought that they were the same person since Rose can be a nickname for Rosetta but then I found out, in the second chapter, that Rosetta is the MC's mom. I like the order of how the chapters shift from past to present time. Odd numbered chapters take place in the past while even numbered chapters take place in the present.

Mans_Vee
Mans_VeeLv1Mans_Vee

A wonderful story to read, the content is very meaningful. I like how the author delivered the story in such a good day. Please continue producing great novels.

Dunge
DungeLv3Dunge

Perfect grammar√ Show not tell√ Intriguing√ Every wording is emphasized with meaning and atmosphere, it's good for someone who likes to immerse themselves with the story. I'm not a professional writer myself so I can't point anything bad within this story but hey, It's something good for your time, a hidden gem hiding from a thousands and thousands of other similar gem with unique and it's own aesthetic. Kudos for the author for making such a wonderful story It's really recommend, I've only read a couple of chapter but I will finish it in the future

lil_japz
lil_japzLv1lil_japz

Very nice story

qweenamanda
qweenamandaLv10qweenamanda

Wow. This book is so descriptive and on point. But wow. How can someone be so creative! How can someone write like legends! This story will definitely be one of the best books in the world. Mind blown!

The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

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Iris_Psyche
Iris_PsycheLv11Iris_Psyche

I was only planning to read a couple of chapters but ended up reading a lot more! The story is very interesting, especially if you like fairy tales with a twist. Like Alice going down a rabbit hole, you'll find a whole new world to this! Definitely going into my recommended list! Keep it up!

m_small
m_smallLv15m_small

What a fantastic multi-faceted, fun read! Rose is growing in strength & understanding of this strange world she has accidently discovered. The elves & talking rocks, the knights & beautiful faries counter-balance the evil that lurks in the shadows. Every chapter worthy of your time!

mynightskies92
mynightskies92Lv2mynightskies92

An irresistible wonderful plot! Filled with suspense and intrigue at every turn . Set in a complex magical world, I especially loved the awesome characters and the pace is thrilling. Can't wait to read more and more and get to see secrets revealed. Keep them coming! Its a lovely piece of writing.

TrinityPhoenix
TrinityPhoenixLv10TrinityPhoenix

Writing is on point! Gosh, it's very well written. Especially, at the beginning where the MC is running away in the woods. It's so well depicted. One of the best novels I've ever read with how good the writing is. I also added this book to my library for my inspiration for writing :3 No words left, 5 stars!

MrE
MrELv14MrE

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NerdQueenQT
NerdQueenQTLv12NerdQueenQT

The writing is confusing and not a lot of background on characters. i stopped after the 3rd chapter because it was so confusing that I got bored.the main character seems to be not very intelligent and barely has any original thoughts. as a reader i dont care about her so if she died i would be ok with it. i gIve this story 1 star. and thats being generous .

kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3kuhaku_sora

At the beginning of the chapters, I could sense that this story is top-notch. There's a bit of a drama where it brought my emotion into a turmoil, making me wanting to read it again. I really love knights and magic genre, so I am looking forward for the progression (if the story is yet to be finished) of the plot.

amber0613
amber0613Lv3amber0613

Wow! Fantasy! I love to read this kind of drama and fantasy together with a twist for adventures. When I read this it kinda excites me to read more of this story. Thank you for updated the story author! Hope to learn more about your story. Keep it up the good work author!

m_small
m_smallLv15m_small

This story really takes you to another time & place! The backstory is so interesting that I want a map image provided so to keep track of where Rose is in this Center Realm. I love her being strong & courageous & am excited to see where her adventures take her.

Allen_Clay012
Allen_Clay012Lv4Allen_Clay012

Good day, this is me the Trademaker and as promised I will review this work. The story is quite interesting despite of me reading the first chapters. It is fun and easy to read, I can understand well the dialogue, the actions of the characters. I am not fan of female main characters but the character of the main story is quite remarkable. She is strong I can tell and by the way she speaks towards other characters is a testament to it. I give this story 4.8 rating because I had fun reading it and it is fun as well. That's all for now thank you!

Henrietta_Otu
Henrietta_OtuLv4Henrietta_Otu

This novel really deserves 5stars from me. Great artwork, I love how the author gives vivid description of events and characters. It's an interesting novel and I highly recommend it to anyone. Good job author, keep doing what you love best.

Mayrhyy
MayrhyyLv2Mayrhyy

No exaggeration here, but this book is really amazing. I got hooked from the first chapter. Suspense and adventure filled. Where's the place you desire? This book will take you straight there! Try it, I'm not kidding. I left my boring land and went to wonderland...LOL

SSKV_R3D
SSKV_R3DLv1SSKV_R3D

The story is intruiging and Interesting. Yes the characyer development is good same as the grammar, but the story is pretty predictable. I hope you can give some unexpected moments specially some twist that will change the faith of the characters drastically, so that they can feel more humane. But overall it was an amazing work! Good job writer...