Castle Of Black Iron Fanficted

Hello Friends. Good day to you all. This is my first try to write a novel. I'm using this fanfic as a media to practice my skill. I'm going to use my own character while changing some stories inside for practice purpose. Please give me a lot of review on this so i can learned my deficiency and i hoped i can continued to grow and present an original novel of mine soon. Thank you. Sincerely Me