Reviews of Captain Melody

Hoi I am the author of captain melody and I want to say that this is going to be my first book I rewrite on this app and I hope you rate it because it took me a long time to think of the plot and the story and I know the grammar is far from perfect because I am still eleven yrs old but I was to be an author in the future and I hope you make my dream come true so please give me a good rating so I can keep going with the story and I wail make a longer chapter next time cause this is my first time doing something like this and thx again peeps