Reviews of Can you mend my broken heart?
Can you mend my broken heart?
niharikabhol
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I RARELY give out a full five stars. But this really deserved it. This has everything that I would ever look for in a romance. The characters are believable and distinct. While they have typical traits of female and male leads and the friendzoned guy bestie; they all still come alive. I cannot stress enough how difficult and uncommon it is to find such realistic romances like these. Yes, Raymond was interested at first sight, but he didn’t go gaga love at first sight completely at her. It was an attraction that turned to realistic frustration when seeing her with another guy, for feeling that their encounter was special to only have it come shattering down. Very very believable. Also, the same with Akira. Although I thought for a moment that her fleeing from Anthony and erasing him from her life without explanation after being so devoted to him seemed somewhat inconsistent in character, actually when you love someone so much and have strong pride (like not wanting to take the backdoor), then this extreme reaction is plausible. Lastly, another plus to this romance is the pacing. I absolutely hate it when they get in bed so quickly or even become girlfriend boyfriend so quickly. It’s just. Not. Realistic. I always ask, where is the period of crushing?! Where the uncertainty pricks painfully as you wonder if they feel the same or if this’ll work out?! I miss that ******* and build-up in a lot of romance stories on here... But your story delivered! Good, correct writing. Enough detail, emotion, and fluidity of settings. I didn’t realize that I read past my typical 20 chapter mark for reviewing longer stories, that’s how good it was. This is probably the only review where I felt like nothing needed to be changed. Really amazing, I’ve actually never been this uncritical as I usually have some suggestions after finding gaps, flaws, or inconsistencies. Then again, I haven’t read that far into the story either. Only to chapter 23, so my opinion could very well change. But as it stands, my expectations were reached for a romance story’s beginning, and you have yourself a firm reader. This is staying in the library!
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This novel not only has romance but it has love, trust, respect, heartbreaks, care, power, money, talent, beauty,betrayals.... Everything that a perfect novel requires...The way u always, always answer our comments n the knock knock stories n the suspense thriller that surely gives me a chill is amazing... N to be mentioned thing... The cliffhangers when the chapter ends with another super suspens... Amazing!!!!! I have connected myself with this novel n u in no time n that's just magical u know.... This novel contains the love which can move mountains n even go to hell to bring back the love... Raymond is so adorable n so is akira.... It's the love I've ever prayed for to the Almighty.... Well I don't really have words to describe such an enigma..... Author Niharika... U are a sweetheart n pure soul as I always say that.... In such a short span of time u have made a biiiiiig big place in our hearts that's really something for an author who does other works n follows her passion too..... Love Abha❤
So dear readers, i am one among u all. And i really feel like sharing to you all after the completion of this 200th chapter. So here i start. This story is about two young people who are both alone in their life with their broken hearts and they try to mend each other's. But all knows there's no happy ending without dealing with problems so they face huge problems from millionaire,billionaire and even much richer one but still they both are overcoming their problems. The story will lead you over romantic phase,over sympathetic situations, suspense, jealousy, adventuring mysteries and many more. This will not only let you love this novel but will make you addicted to it. Don't believe?then go through it. I love it very very very much so am sharing my experience with you all. Moreover the story also deals with their naughty way of expressing love to each. You all will be amazed and feel blessed to read it. I felt it. Really marvelous to read it and still more and more suspense is being created so i am loving it even more day by day.
There are many romance fictions on this website. Perhaps they can even compete with the system novels in terms of quantity. But those with writing like yours are few and far between. So how is your writing? Irresistible. Stability of updates? If anyone complains about more than forty chapters in less than a month...let me smack them across the cheeks. There is nothing wrong with the occasional break if you can maintain such a ratio between speed and quality (but please make the chapters a bit longer...just a bit? I'm worried I will be out of drugs really soon T_T). I also have a feeling that your story will be more grounded than many of those out there. Which gives it a different appeal. Best of luck. You got yourself a new fan.
This is one of the purest things I've read on WN. You don't see this level of realism often. Characters are very relatable and funny, not just sticking to one stereotype but proving themselves to be 3D, with each having their strengths and weaknesses. The family bonds between Akira, her brother, and Vickram is superb. I like how you made it so that it was diverse--usually, the MC in a novel like this is Chinese and everything is set in China. But not with this one(you know, just a typical trait of WN) Writing Quality Definitely very powerful when it comes to wrangling with emotions. You can feel the characters come alive. The flow is nice but personally, I don't like reading large blocks of texts. Then again, this is a opinion and I am in no position to ask an author to change their writing style. Some spelling/grammatical mistakes, but not to the point where a reader doesn't know what's going on. Overall, a much higher quality than what you usually find on WN. Updates From what I see, the updates are stable. People will say your chapters are a little short as most novels here are usually 1.2k-2k per chapter, but I say screw them and go what you think you should go. Story Development Nice pacing, not too fast yet not too slow. Already, we can see the structure of what seems to be the main conflict in the later chapters. Establishment of character goals/motives in roughly the first 25 chapters. Strong relationships between characters makes the story feel alive. Realistic reactions to scenarios and quite realistic ways of coping(I would list them but then this would have to be a spoiler), allows for more character development in the future chapters. Character Design I have nothing more to say than that your characters are rich(in both senses of the word) and have vibrant personalities. You used an old trope with your own unique twist on it. World Background Earth. Usage of companies(I haven't read enough into it for me to know anything about the companies other than one is a game start-up? I'm not great at business *sweats*) Either way, it's a 5.
I just loved this novel as it relates most of the ordinary people. Even its a novel and not a reality but then novels are based on reality only and I think like in the novel you always meet a wrong person in your life to bring you close to your Mr Right God has created for you. I hope Raymond happens a reality for most of the girls waiting for their Mr. Right. Thank u Author for creating such novel. 😍😍😘😘.......
This novel definitely shines. The grammar is perfect and the author has very good writing skill with perfect plot planning and twists. Every chapter is like a cliffhanger and makes you want for more. But the best part of this novel is that is it the story of common people like you and me. Thus it is more real and doesn't have any CEO crap. A breath of fresh air. I will give all my stars to this one.
Finally!!!! I need more updates and need to get more SS... Can't wait for more stories. Thank you for this chapter! Hope to read more stories about them, more sweet moments. Wish they can both help each other move forward from those painful relationship they once had. Hopefully the pain they experienced will lead them to a more meaningful and wonderful life path to togetherness. I know, it's too early to tell, there will be hurdles along the way. Which will only spice up their life.
The novel continues to develop fast and updates are regular. Vikram is selfish and caught up in himself and is unaware the Arika has only brotherly feelings for him as childhood friends, Raymond will be disappointed when he realized Raymond has already invited her to the dance however he will get to dance with her and that's when Vikram will realize their true feelings for each other. I guess he will do something irrational
