Joel_West
Author has a smooth prose style which makes everything flow really well. I liked how much thought went into the origin behind the world building, I really appreciate that kind of detail. Bringing some actual history into it added credibility to the entire story in my opinion. I like that the tone is manages to be somewhat light despite the subject matter. Looking forward to more.
This is awesome, I love the way, the writer has opened the book and how he/she flows with his words. He writing skill is excellent. However, I don't feel the same energy in the synopsis. I think the synopsis has not done justice to the book. Also, the book cover. Please work on the book cover first.
The story is just getting started but it is highly promising. While there are many unanswered questions, the story is following through on a group of young main characters with superpowers. We'll just have to see what the title of the book has to do with the story, and how the opening scene is linked to our main protagonists!