shabnam
I have read the first ten chapters and while the characters and world seem interesting enough, the grammer and spelling mistakes make it verry confusing to read. There is also a few times where characters are talking to one another but it is unclear who is speaking. I think it is shaping up to be a good read, but it is in desperate need of a proofreader
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