Reviews of Bring A Dream
Bring A Dream
Ayasaki3211
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Kamala_NadhiaLv10Kamala_Nadhia
Hmmmm.... Bab 1 ceritanya terasa kyk kumpulan background story yg di-press jadi satu yah. Fokus ceritanya jadi agak pecah krn ada kilas balik & bbrp keterangan yg akan lebih baik kalau di chapter lain baru di reveal. Satu lagi, chapter ini aku baca style penulisannya kyk LN Jepang yah, beda ama style WN China yg udah jd barang staples disini 🤣 Overall bagus & masih banyak ruang utk dikembangkan.....