In general, I think that the story is at a tremendous start. But you need to take it in to consideration, that the paragraphs you write on Notes/Docs/Computer etc etc. In some cases won't appear the same here on Webnovel, Order-wise. You need to give each chapter a better view, watch punctuations carefully so you can connect 3-4 sentences in to a paragraph. Normally this isn't a big problem, but it will make the Chapters neat and in some aspects more readable. The chapters could use more words too, aim for 1.5k
2nd review for this story. Again, from what I can see, this is not like any novel. It's a short story, simple as that. Hence, why the chapters seems short. A short novel with a touch of poetry. I read this before, but I was only up to chapter 43. Now that there's more chapter, and I'm glad I waited. It's refreshing to read again, especially when there's artwork that came with the chapters. So, if you're the type of reader who is into short novels with poetry style of writing, then this is for you :) (** - Sorry 'bout the delay. Had things to take care of first in real life. I hope you're safe and healthy, Cynk :D )
Author's Review. A story based on visual content. A Shape Shifting being finds a man looking to start a new business. He has contacts among the very wealthy. As a very exclusive operation, wealthy clients can have portrait images created of them at peak youth and looks. Art for the chapters will be provided by links in the author note section. This is intended to be Safe For Work.