On vacation, you can meet people well outside the usual. One business innovator makes his new friend a partner. Wealthy Clients can have perfect portraits. Body morphing models can give the perfect image of 'yourself'. This story is entered in a webcomic contest. Please vote, subscribe, and rank: https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/boudoir-glamour-inc-b/list?title_no=429738
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When Ayra Sylvahnna was summoned by the president of Foxerall at the bewitching hour of a stormy night, she realised it was the dreadful beginning of a dark end. When an A-rank mission entailing the capture of a vicious demon was assigned to them, Ayra Sylvahnna knew this was going to be very different from her other missions. A journey encompassing around three wizards, who find themselves amidst a deadly storm of unfathomable power, cryptic prophecies, dead kings and lost queens, fight against death itself. A chronicle of friendship, love, happiness and betrayal that revolves around three powerful and fierce-hearted wizards who each have a story to tell. || THE PICTURE IN THE COVER IS NOT MINE. ALL CREDIT GOES TO THE ORIGINAL ARTIST ||
Death is such a simple and yet so complicated phenomenon. We spent all our lives trying to avoid death but eventually succumbing to it. But then what? Is everything over? Is it really the end as we imagine or all the stories about reincarnation, about ghosts are true? What happens when someone dies? There are many stories which end at death and some that extend beyond death. But my story... It begins at death. Hey everyone! I'm Chloe. I've recently become a ghost and I have no memories of my human life. Join me in my adventure where I discover my past and my future together. The adventure of a "Life" that exists beyond "Death." *PS: The cover picture is not mine, and I'll take it down if the original owner wants me to.* If you want to connect with me: Feel free to message me in Discord. Here is my ID: sillymlk#8687
Love and dreams don't just fall from the sky - there are tears to be shed and things to be made right. At the age of sixteen, Lillian Daffodil still has no idea of who she wants to be. Her unladylike mien, peculiar sense of creativity and hoydenish behavior would always keep her from seeing her true charm and ability. Lost and with no destination in mind, underestimated for being a commoner, persecuted by envious peers, and unfortunate in matters of love - a girl could only take so much but even then, she just continued to move forward in hope to find what her heart was seeking all the time. "A model...?" Little did she know that one sudden offer could change her life forever - Lillian Daffodil soon becomes known as the "Lady of Many Trades". Then, enter the son of a Count who keeps encouraging her to find her passion, a playboy with a sketchy sideline job, a designer who strives to revolutionize the fashion industry, and a travelling peddler with a big secret to reveal. When romance and ambitions come together, a fashion fairytale starts to unfold. (Cover Photo not mine: Credits to the original artist)
"Will you save my father?" Owen is a fifteen year old boy with only his father which are settling in Las Vegas for now. Half of their family was burned in a wildfire and is lost in their family and themselves. Doxin and Jacques are very experienced detectives who are not much in communicative with each other. But then, one event changes their whole lives and actions. Exprience the excitement and thrill in the story, the bonds and the nerve-grasping words, and the adventure and danger in the story.
Seventh Immortal has been buried in Cold Palace for 900 years.Just as he was about to wake up from his sleep a young,charming village girl came in to the Cold Palace and disrupts his sleep
“What is love?” someone asked me. I said love is the most beautiful thing in the world, and love is the cure for everyone.” The lady sitting behind me laughed and said No! That not; “Love is the drug that makes you blind,” she said. She gave me a book and whispered in my ears, don't be blind, and she disappeared. I looked at the book, i read the title : "The drug that makes you blind, Because it's first love." and there is a note, you will get your answer soon. I don't understand, I want to hear her thoughts, and ask why it makes us blind. But she disappeared like the wind, and I never saw her again. It feels like some mystery. Let's read, and find it together. ***************** Joskylar is a girl who trying to find about the answer of the question, "Why love makes us Blind?" The story start with her reading of the book named, " The drug that make you Blind, Because it's first love." which is a love story between a girl named ‘Jomira’ and a boy named ‘Skylar’. They two fell in love because of the letters that they wrote to each other. It all starts with a letter. Waiting for someone is not an easy task, but if it's first love, then waiting is worth it. If that day comes, does fate make it possible? After five years of long-distance love, they are finally going to meet for the first time. Will destiny bring them together? What tragedies await them? Will Joskylar find her answer? A story with lots of mysteries; that will fascinate you and break your heart. Let's get ready to cry out loud... Lots of sweet moments are awaiting you... **************** Hi readers! It's a story about finding first love and fighting for it. **** As I'm a Cdrama, Kdrama and Kpop fan and an EXO lover so I'm using the Korean place and other Korea related thing in my story. **** From this story, you will get nothing but I'm sure I will make you believe "Love is a drug that makes you blind". Enjoy reading... N/B Image in the cover page is not mine, it's CRT to it's owner. I edited it.
I was afraid to wish for more wishes, heaven granted us more time when I was slipping away from you back then when you rescued me from the battle field, I'm not afraid of the pain, but I can't tolerate the torment to have you go through the hurt again. We asked for a chance to live the next life differently for us to show our love to all. They listened again as cupid strike and the world witness our story that we made. But as how we have been told, each episode that we live through the century came with a price. We were lost moving on until the day stopped again, the eyes in-front froze as I looked up, a familiar figure which stood staring back on this same slope where we once cherished so much. And as two figures stood there frozen in time... the only movement was that of the snowflakes that falls through in between us that were once showering us with their blessings but now here, it melted like tears from heaven as the two souls stared at each other.... The vision of happy memories where the whisper of "I want to spend every winter here with you" stabs the heart even more as both tried to stay composed under the cold winter sky, stranded from the past. The nightmare of never wanting to bump into the past came crashing.... are we being fooled again? Is it heaven's wish for us so that we will live on or is there more to it.... C 1: The past & the present C 2:Dreams that haunt our misses C 3: Seal my heart please & protect him C 4: The snowflakes that binds us C 5: The wind tells me you are near C 6: Stay this way C 7: When souls unite C 8: From the depth of my heart C 9: The morning after C 10: The knotted fate at the start C11:The lighted path called home C12:When it becomes unbearable C13:The first séparation from the past C 14:The morning coffee filled with love C 15:Let us be bonded from now on C16:True Love that can’t be concealed C17:Through the centuries I still love you C18:Will you stand with me again C19: 258 - Hear My Heart C20: Our Dream Place that opens to the sky above C21: As one we live - need you by my side always C22: Beyond the deal - Our future that sparks from a dream C23: Author’s Closing Note: Dream with Passion, Live with Purpose, Act with Wisdom Updated 1 Sept 2020
Zohaifa escaped the jaws of death, but didn’t return empty-handed. Reappearing with lightning powers, he was thrust into a foreign world where the supernatural was commonplace. Faced with the challenge of new enemies with distinct powers and gaining support from friends with unique abilities, Zohaifa's mission is to bring peace to all the people living in agony in this diverse world. But in a world where the very act of travelling is life-threatening, will Zohaifa be able to achieve that? Discord: https://discord.gg/Fdem5jg
*I am Currently processing my exclusive contract with my other story. I apologize for not updating this daily. As soon as the processing of contract is successfully signed, the updates for this story will become daily. For now, the updates will be during weekends for now. Soon it will be daily updates.* ================ Alliyah is a 21 years old girl who lived as an orphan who has never left the Caragua island. Until one night, a group of vampires wreaked havoc in Caragua island in which death and chaos ensued. Alliyah was supposed to be dead but now she became a vampire. She wakes up no longer a human but a vampire. What will happen to her? How will she survive, now that she is a vampire? --- Author's Note: Everything written in this story is all fig of my imagination and has no reflection to real life. PLEASE Vote this book with power stones because it's in WPC. PLEASE. I need your support. ~I don't own the cover. I just took in internet~
In a Magical gem fuelled fantasy/dystopian world of Gaia. A son (Knoxx Abbot) struggles through life as a runaway with his father, as the authorities began to chase them one day. Confused and in a daze while trying to escape their pursuers, he hopes that one day they may be able to get back to their normal lives. But with mysteries lying in wait and big secrets uncovered, will he be able to go back? Or a bigger fate awaits him?
A monster....that was what she called herself. But that didn't stop him from loving her till the ends of the earth. What will happen when a mutant and a 'perfectly normal' human defy the status quo and come together?..... »Sneak peek 1, In a dark room, “GET. OFF. ME!” she yelled from the frustration of not being able to use her powers on him and also his shamlessness. She didn't bargain for this! At all! “Shh...you don't want to wake your mum and dad up now, do you?” he silenced her by putting his slender finger on her lips. “If you don't get off of me right this instant, I'll scream and you'll ultimately be banned from entering this house, your choice.” she stated with one of her eyebrows raised. “Scream, Penny.”, he provoked her with his eyes on her lips. Angry cause he doubted her, she yelled, “Mu....!”, but her scream was cut off by his lips. =_==_==_=_=_==_==_==_==_==_=_=_= »Sneak peek 2: In a villa, Houston Young Master: “I want you to report on her every move, don't let her out of your sight. She mustn't get hurt on your watch, is that clear?” “Yes sir!” “Young master, she lifted the Bugatti you bought for her and dumped it into the swimming pool!...she lifted it!!” he ran in to report. Young Master: “So what? Let her vent, and make sure to get a new one before the end of the day, unfailingly.” he replied with a wave of his hands as he chased his bodyguard away. “Young master, did you see her eyes?! It changed it's colour twice!” Young Master: “Are you into music now, what's with the rhyming?”, he replied defiantly. “Pstt..Young master, I just saw her climb out of her bedroom window to meet her friend.” *Crash* Young Master: “Are you spying on my woman in her bedroom now?! Tell me! what else have you seen?!” he yelled as he grabbed his bodyguard's neck. Bodyguard: “........” ==_==_==_==_==_==_==_==_==_== “She'll definitely kill you one day, son!” “And I'll make sure to die happily, mum!”, he said with a goofy smile. »The cover isn't mine, credits go to the original author....@freepiks.com Discord: Daisy_T#8878
Anna, a girl who misses her best friend must decide which guy can fill her heart so that she can rebuild her friendship status. Will Bucky Azzahra, Anna's childhood friend? Or Cole Mcdunny, the man who spent his life for Anna?
The Gods and Godesses of the Old had long ended their reign and now appoints souls to be the new masters of their domain. These appointments might happen in a hundred years or so but most often than not, the deities reign in their cold throne for eternity. Calista Andres wakes up in a mysterious small boat traveling a vast river. By her side was a mysterious person who was silently reading a book. She asks for his name, which the man replied with a sly smile on his face. The man introduced himself as a god of death and declared her as his "katabang" or soul slave. With no memory of how she got there and with no idea what her job implies, Calista accepts the role after being abused by the death god. Now, with her new role and power as a "katabang", she is determined to know how she got killed while being the slave to a powerful god. Only time will tell if she can get her vengeance to her killer.
Amidst the pale moonlight, a famous and wealthy man was struck blindly inside his manor. It is up to Europe’s most famous detective and his assistant to figure who is responsible for his death and what are his or her motives? Little do the analysts know, the culprit(s) dwelling within seventeen unfamiliar faces is a mastermind cloaked in a disguise of an innocent. Will the analysts be able to solve the mystery behind this or would it turn out into something quite unexpected? Secrets and hooligans are revealed in the first book of the Wulfric Maxwell Series: Manor of Lies and Deceptions. Who is to blame for the death of an incident? Seventeen suspects, one murderer or so they thought.
Usually, it's the zombie that runs after the human, right? But what if it's the other way around? It's the undead that gets caught, and by a hopeless romantic to top it off. --- An Excerpt --- "Making you smile is the best achievement I can ever have." He, a teen supermodel. A wealthy heir. A popular guy in school. A boy who had everything. Just what was it about Anastasia that made Zen say such things? She, an ordinary teenager. A baker's daughter. A mere friend. A girl who used to have nothing. "You already achieved far greater than that, though. What part of making me smile is more fulfilling than those?" Really, what was it that he saw in her? "That part when I feel like I don't need anything else. After all, you're everything I ever dream of." At any other day, Anastasia would probably have a heart attack after hearing those words. Blood would most likely crawl all the way up to her ears as she combusted on the spot. Her cheeks would bloom like the color of a rose that they might as well light up a whole city. But now, that's nowhere near possible. To begin with, her heart already stopped beating and there's no more blood running through her veins. She's as good as an empty shell. A broken vessel. A walking corpse. "And to be honest, even though I used to have a crush on you, I'd rather not hear those anymore," were the only words that she could think of as she veiled her concern with a sad smile, her gaze as lifeless as her own body. --- Story Synopsis --- This is a story about an undead girl who thought she'd be getting the 'Stockholm Syndrome' treatment after being locked up by a mysterious guy. Said guy turns out to be more than an important puzzle piece of her missing memories. Why does he seem to care so much for her? What's up with this castle and princess treatment? And why does he keep saving her when she's already dead in the first place? With the help of a diary she found in his room, secrets start to unravel as the truth of their pasts unfold little by little. While she's at it, she also has to deal with this doting human's overweening romantic gestures and make sure not to fall for every sugarcoated tell-tale. -- WPC #135 Silver Tier Winner -- (Want a little teaser? Go here ➜ https://youtu.be/V6MwPFa1YP4) (Cover Photo's not mine: Credits to the original artist)
"Thrown in a magical realm but she doesn't want to leave." Rose Ann Bardot is a girl who’s been living under the roof together with terrible people after tragically losing her beloved mother. Her grandmother and her aunties have mistreated and starved her for as long as she can remember. Every day she hopes that she’ll be set free from the grasp of her evil relatives. The only thing that sparks hope in her heart is a beautiful necklace that her mother entrusted to her. Knowing that whenever she wears it, she feels the comfort of her mother. Little does she know that one day, the necklace would be the cause of her salvation and her discovery of a new world. Join Rose as she embarks on a journey to a place she would never imagine exists. And along the way she uncovers secrets and mysteries she’d never expected. Inspired by Alice in Wonderland & The Nutcracker and The Four Realms. +++ I do not own the art on my book cover. Credits go to whoever illustrated it. Keep me motivated and support me by donating one of your power stones. I appreciate it so much.
The year 2193, two generations passed since the European Union collapsed after the events of WW3. Quarta (Nion), a citizen of the lands of Aleksithimia, is one of few people who was allowed to keep her emotions from being taken away by the new regime of her country. Assigned as a member of a special mission unit called "The Keepers" which regrouped multiple individuals with the phenomenal physical and mental aptitudes, so they could provide the authority and inside security. In order to adapt to the environment, she had to utterly kill and remove all emotions and become mindless law enforcer machines eliminating anyone who dared to oppose the system. Haunted by the deaths of the ones she's slain, time passes on. After years of living and serving for the Utopian City that has been constructed by the prosper Aleksithimia, one of four rulers of the New World; Suffocating as an emotionless persona, fraught with distress that she became a tool rather than a human being. Alone in the perfectly unperfect universe, she has begun her long journey to discover the truth about the world she is living in, and most importantly, her true self that has been erased a long time ago...
It's anything but normal in 2017. Some people seem normal in society, others....not so much. Blemished Soup with Garlic is a collection of short stories with narrators beyond the status quo. Some are trapped in places they never wished to be in, others becomes witnesses of madness, and the remaining, well, best let the stories do the talking.
True Title: Tales from Midas: The Runaway Struggling novelist Athena Morrison once thought life had nothing left to offer her. Living a reclusive lifestyle and trying to make ends meet while trying to make a name for herself as an author, she certainly had it hard enough. Coupled with extreme bouts of depression and constant threats with running from her dark past however, one can only go so far before something snaps. So in one stormy evening, plagued by the demons of her own making, she planned on ending it all. Before she was stopped by some unsuspecting maintenance crew. A fateful encounter, if she were to describe it. Change was coming to her life. Perhaps it was time to stop running, to try and take hold of her own destiny. A lot of things were happening in this city, money changing hands, deals being made; politics were being played and power constantly in flux. And while change is something to be feared, it was also something to be excited about. Athena only hoped that it was for the better. ⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛ Bug me on Discord: https://discord.gg/NZA6Jun Bug me on Twitter: @FriedMokou
Ashe lived her whole life hiding under the blankets, taking down notes at the back of her class, and secretly mastering coding in the corner of her room. She was never in the spotlight. Until, The characters in an about to be released movie somehow come to life. The shy Ashe is now forced to come out of her shell and is assigned to deal with the main lead so that the Death Six won't destroy the World's Biggest gaming company. Too bad, the male lead is a sight for sore eyes. Will the scientific minded Ashe fall for him? Or will she face the truth and save her family?
Rachael was living a regular ordinary life, she thought that her having her heart broken was the biggest of her worries. Until she returned to her home town to have the biggest of burdens placed on her shoulders. Will she find the strength to fight on, or will it make her crumble in the end?
Schemes, lies and plots. The devices people in power use to remain in their seats. Underneath of the conflict and power struggle an unknown entity is being born. They are not born of greed nor thirst for lust or even crave for avarice. They are a phantom but a shadow the country has summoned in its turmoil. Should chaos ensues shall the defenders of the land be enough in ensuring the safety of the people? A new hope rises from slumber. As chaos engulf the land and hopelessness aflict the people, will his efforts be enough?
Had an assignment to write unresolved cases, Lilith, a rebellious pretty girl was excited and thought about the abandoned house near her new neighborhood. To her dismay, her teacher rejected her assignment after writing an unsolved case of Felicia. The more she tries to find the truth, the more she uncovers. Slowly, connecting the dots…. she found something that needs to solve to prevent things from happening. Could Lilith solve the case? Or was it solving the case would remain unsolved. the photo used in the cover is not mine credits to the owner/artist
In a world full of magic, Anura Soma is magicless. Hidden away from the world by her family, Anura is ostracized by all the other noble houses. Seen as no better than a commoner, Anura suffers as the shame of her family. But as fate has it, one day she'll be...enthroned. The voice of the sphere, faint, raspy and deep, spoke, "A queen shall rule next and prosper this land. One decade from now shall see the imperial's conquest end. A myriad of challengers shall vie for the throne. Together or alone, the crown sits with no head to call its own. The last one standing shall point towards the sky. Believe and breathe, the final queen's might shall fly." (2,000+ words per chapter) If you have spare change, feel free to buy me a coffee at: https://ko-fi.com/lwnovels
Ava Salford and Annie Garcia have been best friends since they were little. But one day Annie mysteriously dies and everyone forgets what happens to her. But Ava is determined to find out what happened to her best friend as well as Noah tagging along. She comes across a creature and from there on her whole life changed. She starts seeing ghost and dead people. She goes to find out why this is happening to her just for her to meet her worst nightmare. She starts gaining these supernatural powers. As she goes on her quest to find Annie she uses her powers to lure people to help her and ends up in the underworld. Would she find her way back to Noah or would she be stuck in the underworld forever? Will she ever find Annie again?
COMPLETED A small story about adventurers, local history enthusiasts, treasure hunters. They wander around cities, forests, mountains, steppes and deserts, seek metal artifacts and search magnets for historical artifacts and sell some of them at auctions, donate some to museums and keep some in their home collections. They work in archives and funds, second-hand bookkeepers do not forget, they look for old books, road workers and topographic maps of the 17-20 centuries. There is the only main character Fang and his partner Dara. --- English is the same as in other novels. While it is far from good. The approximate number of chapters is from 60 to 100. Updates 3 chapters per week. The number of words is from 600 to more 1200. COMPLETED -------------------------------------------------- This is a work of art. Any resemblance to real people or real events is purely coincidental.
40 years ago, our world believed that magic was merely fiction, and nothing more. But that all changed when it was revealed that magic truly does exist to the public. To that end, a place was created, a place where magic can be studied and taught. And that place is Takamagahara Island, the home of Kurokami Tatsuro, a young man who just wants to live his days in peace. That is until he has a fateful encounter one day, an encounter that would change not only his life but the entire world ...
The Legend of Hades. The bloodshed caused by a generational massacre finally has to come to an end. The mistake of one endangers the life of all. From the line of Hades, a King will rise to fulfill this legend. And from the line of Octavius, the god of wolves, the tears of his direct descendant will burn armies. a powerful and dangerous combination. A mistake made by the gods now has to be rectified Alas, will they rectify the right one or will it just cause more problems? .
...From the minute Carson Antoni meets Tasnim Devereaux in an deserted alley, he is captivated by her. But there is secrets lurking in Tasnim's past, secrets that Carson will use to get the power he wants... .....~..... ...A sweet smell of lily and vanilla attack my senses. There is tiny figure pressed into my body. It is the body of a girl, her tight bosom is pushed into my sculpted chest. She must have one of those next to nothing crop tops on cause I can feel her naked skin touching the exposed skin of my abs. I slowly try to push her away but my hand gets tangled in her hair. She is soft and her smell is intoxicating, I do not want to let go. My voice is gentle but somewhat trembling as I speak to her "Miss, miss are you?" She does not say a word but instead she grabs onto me, her body is tight against mine. I can feel her chest rise and fall as she is breathing heavy. Her head is resting on my shoulder, I feel her warm breath on my ear. It sounds like she is whispering but I cannot hear... ...I almost whisper in her ear. It is like I just want to feel my lips against her skin "Is there something I can do? Tell me what I can do to help you?" She slowly pulls away as if she only now realize what has happen "Oh my god I am so sorry about that. I have a nasty habit of walking into things"... .....~..... ...She slowly moves away from my body, her heat leaving the closeness of mine too soon. She has the most piercing deep sparkle in her eyes. She looks at me and I swear it feels like she is looking straight into my soul. "Oh shit!" she utters in surprise "I walked into you again!"...
They say, time stops when you meet the love of your life. But for Ophelia White, it ran out. Xavier Diego, a 17 year old boy, takes his life one fateful night, leaving everyone in grief. Due to this, Ophelia's already messy life gets messier as the heavenly world entangles itself with her. With a mission to save Xavier and the Angel of Death on her tail, will she outrun time? Or will it outrun her?
Tania is an only child born to parents of Russian and Indian origin. She has lived her entire life in Russia. After the demise of her parents in a car accident, she is left all alone in a huge house. Her paternal and maternal grandparents want to take her into their fold and plan to come to Moscow to convince her to join them in India or Ukraine. Since her childhood, she had been having these recurring dreams in which she sees herself visiting certain temples and forts. These dreams feel so real. The doctors she visits in Moscow are not able to figure out what is wrong with her. On the contrary, they tell her that she has a vivid imagination. Tania decides to search for a reply herself and reads a book on dreams as well as a few volumes on 'Past Life Regression'. The day her relatives arrive from India and Ukraine, she, in her dream, travels to India and meets her past self. Tania's past self had another name. Her name was Sanya and she had lived centuries ago as a princess of Kalibangan during the Indus Valley Civilisation. Sanya tells Tania of a plot to kill her in the present life. A plot had been hatched in her past life too. At that time her brother, mother and father had been murdered. Who was the murderer in the past and what connection does he have with her in the present life? Please read on to know more. Folks, this is not a Fantasy Romance novel. Unfortunately, the genre for female lead novels gives the term Fantasy Romance only. There is no choice. Maybe I will add a Romance angle at the end. I am publishing 1 chapters a week as I need to do a bit of research for the chapters.
"Are you willing to kill or be killed?" That's where his journey started. He chose to kill. ...... "I want my mommy." Nathan said. with tears dripping from his eyes. "If you go to them, you will be killed, boy. You might even endangered the life of your twin brother. Why not give them hope that one day, their son will return alive, than making them mourn you a few weeks after they have you back." The man said. He's the leader of an assassination organization, who sees potential in the boy and didn't want him to be wasted in the hand of those who wanted to kill him. "My family will be sad. They won't know that I'm alive." He said in a low tone, giving up the will to return home. He didn't want harm to come to his brother. "Let's talk to them. Let's make them realize that you wish to stay and will one day return." The man said and it worked. Nathan nodded his head. And that's how his journey as an assassin began. ***** "Look after my daughter. She likes you and you know it. If you don't feel the same, keep making it clear to her that you only see her as your sister. She will kill for you and will be your shadow. Lead the organization well." That was the last word from the man that raised him. The so called daughter, oh she's one stubborn girl. She's not planning to back down from her feelings. ....... "You can leave now. Tell him to send the girl in." Nathan casually said. They just deal with some idiots that tried to prove they are smart, but got drugged in the process. He didn't allow her take any drink, so she's fine, but knowing that he needed to relieve himself and she's here with him. Yet, another woman would come in, she summoned the courage. She knew he would have her neck for this boldness, but she wanted him. She had always do. "Take me instead." She said and before he could flash her a glare, she sealed his lips with her own. And that's when his feelings started to waver.
In general, I think that the story is at a tremendous start. But you need to take it in to consideration, that the paragraphs you write on Notes/Docs/Computer etc etc. In some cases won't appear the same here on Webnovel, Order-wise. You need to give each chapter a better view, watch punctuations carefully so you can connect 3-4 sentences in to a paragraph. Normally this isn't a big problem, but it will make the Chapters neat and in some aspects more readable. The chapters could use more words too, aim for 1.5k
2nd review for this story. Again, from what I can see, this is not like any novel. It's a short story, simple as that. Hence, why the chapters seems short. A short novel with a touch of poetry. I read this before, but I was only up to chapter 43. Now that there's more chapter, and I'm glad I waited. It's refreshing to read again, especially when there's artwork that came with the chapters. So, if you're the type of reader who is into short novels with poetry style of writing, then this is for you :) (** - Sorry 'bout the delay. Had things to take care of first in real life. I hope you're safe and healthy, Cynk :D )
Author's Review. A story based on visual content. A Shape Shifting being finds a man looking to start a new business. He has contacts among the very wealthy. As a very exclusive operation, wealthy clients can have portrait images created of them at peak youth and looks. Art for the chapters will be provided by links in the author note section. This is intended to be Safe For Work.