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Okay so Juray is am interesting character, however before I get into that i should address an issue. The grammar is not perfect, and it might be difficult to understand some of the sentences but overall you can get the flow. This is a good, book. The author makes sure to help you see the passion of gaming that the main character Juray has. I believe the world building is good too and the setting up of M.Z. I feel that the juggling between school and entertainment that we follow the main character do in the first chapters is what sets the tone, making you relate to him, coz hey, who doesn't enjoy playing games. All in all, good book. I hope the author can improve the grammar to bring out the best in this book. Rock on!
First off, very amazing novel so far. The dialogue is 10/10 and the story telling is 11/10 Another thing is that there are very few grammar errors which is MAJOR plus for me as I am someone who dislikes reading novels without noticeable Grammar errors. So basically this is a must read novel, especially if you're into this genre. Props to the author on reaching 200 chapters so far. There's plenty for you to read in your spare time.[img=recommend][img=update] This is Definitely a must read!!!
This novel is definitely a good read, I like the writer's character's description and imagery, if you are into the gaming genre then you should totally give this a read, I also like the character development. Although there are few grammatical errors, it is definitely not enough to disturb your reading. Author keep up the good work, Fighting!!!
Review for the first 10 chaps. I like the MC. Ambitious but not so much to get astray. The writing quality of the story is not good. Grammar is not good and some words are out of the dictionary. The story's pace is nice so is the character design. Give you a 10/10 on that. The chapters however are a bit too short. I am not asking for too much but 1k per chapter should be the norm for web novels