FaKie_KitSuKo
Senpai, I'll leave you a review. Your work is great and has an anime feel to it like the light animes about friendship and everyday life. Your updating stability is good, I hope you maintain those daily updates haha. Don't get lazy! Continue on fixing your punctuations, I will support you til the end. -Your Kouhai 〜( ̄▽ ̄〜)
This book.isn't for me.the prologue is too long.and i thought that there was a japanese vibe going on.unfortunately the author.did not capture.that vibe.as for the structure of the story it's bland.and boring. and very VERY scripted.i can't feel the emotions of the characters it's as if it is forced. the personalities of the characters is also forced. your grammar is somewhat tolerable but know how to use proper words in a sentence. as well as proper commas and periods. NOT JUST THAT but fix the broken words of the sentences those are making me cringe so much. i was excited when i saw this book but my excitement turned into instant dissapointment. i also read what the author said. you apologise for your mistakes but your apology doesn't validate.to anything if you don't fix it. Your writing just lacks.professionalism.i'm sorry to say. it's as if.a kid wrote it. and yet a children's book is more fun than this. i rarely give.5.0 star but to those who earned and deserve it. right now.this book is 2-3 stars in my view.
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