Immanioripse
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There goes our author worrying about his English skills, but truth to be told he's a bit better than normal native english speakers. Dag our little protagonist, hope he becomes that Viking op guy, and exploring other aspects. Story's good hope the author not quit the book half way hanging around. Make atleast 300 chapters for us, author kun. And thnx for chapters.
I think I gave the book a fair shot but it just does not suit my taste. The MC has no character development after leaving Earth, his values are weird af, he spent like 2 days in the Clan and the person that got him kicked later 'sacrificed' himself to save him and MC thought of him as a great friend? While his father of 10 years is never mentioned again XD? He idolized a dead person while he just gives no **** about a living one smh. MC seems too stupid for my taste like I don't mind a dense MC but one who has 2 brain cells is a no :D Kinda weird because when he came to this pantheon the instructor called him smart but somehow he became more of a caveman 'me smash' 'ooga booga' 'me kill' 'u ded' after the 10 year skip. You could say I should just read more because it gets better but is 86 chapters not enough?
The authors novel is not bad I just think he tried to introduce to many different elements in a single book, and the characters sense of logic is odd. I mean the Xis punish humans because humans action aprently messed with the universal balance. The planet was dying because the sun burnt out I mean humans arent responsible for that. Now don't get me wrong im not stopping anyone from reading this book just giving my review.
This novel is underestimated! Great story development, writing quality and character design. World background amazing. The expressive capacity and imagination of the author are high. The story has a great potential and and I hope it has the right success, because it deserves it. I TOTALLY RECOMMEND IT, five full stars 🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟
I think this has some potential, but honestly, the grammar mistakes are a major turn off for me. I expect the occasional mistake and/or typo but so far there are too many syntax mistakes. I only read up to chapter 9 so far, will the grammar improve in later chapters? I didn't give a bad grade because I think the author crafted a very original and interesting world background and should he get someone to proof read and fix the mistakes in the early chapters I would truly enjoy this novel.
🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟 More stars please!! Dag's story is fascinating, the author is able to keep you on your toes, the story is fluid and meets all expectations. The language is perfect. Not all authors are capable of creating a certain suspense, a certain story like that. This book deserves to be successful and deserves to grow! 5 stars, absolutely 😍
ok so this story is literally the only reason why I even signed in, I don't leave reviews at all, but this one, I just had to cuz it is fucking GOLD, Please please please do consider reviewing this novel, and do all that jazz so the author doesn't get discouraged and drops it. And for the author, if you do read this, I say BS to you saying that this is your first work cuz it's too good to be, thank you for this amazing work and keep it up mate.
A nordic sci-fi? Haha, well that's new. Anyways, the story and the plot is interesting and I can tell that this is quite a hidden gem among the novels here. Grammar-wise, mind the proper usage of capitals, that's the issue for me. Overall, it's great and I suggest readers out there to give it a try.