VladDraculMichael
I'm really glad to read a unique novel like this one with cool plot, unique characters and especially the yuri it's definitely the work of perfection but the only problems are the pronouns and the update but I know that you will improve and please update more it's been like days since you update Good Luck Author!!
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A good story that made me interested though the downside of it is how the author's uses his/her pronoun which needed improvement and a bit to his/her verb... if he can improve of these two then even of there is always wrong grammars the readers won't be confused of the flow of the story and could be understandable at least a bit and not skipping some paragraphs... P.S. I don't mean to offend someone but I really do like the story... yet there are some things I could not understand because of the two I mentioned above. Right, I do have some question though... is the MC a half breed or what? This confuses me because she says she came from a forgotten race and calls herself a vampire then dragon another time. What is the connection of these two? Because nomatter how I see it Vampire and Dragon are two different race and not one so... is LW a halfbreed that has a blood of a Vampire and a Dragon?
This novel has potential to be a very good one... but ruined by severely lack of proofread... And the author seems don't care about the pronouns... he/she, her/him, her/his, are all mixed up badly... That's why I rated 2-star on Writing Quality.... Please fix it..it's only on early chapters.. I hope it gets better