Biako
After reading some reviews I was not convinced enough to read this story but still I thought i will atleast I'll read 1 chapter so I kept reading and now I am dieing for update (even though I just read it today ) ... Well all in all really interested in the development of the story , even though starting chapter looked simple as the story progressed this elements started giving shape to the story ... Keep up the good work ~
Not as good as Author's Skelly Dave. grammar seems bad, well author did says this novel was written way back then...anyways. ----------------------------------------- I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!.
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ACK!!!! I HOPE THIS STORY GETS A CONTINUATION!!!! YOUR STORIES ARE LIKE A DRUG...SO ADDICTING!!! These stories of yours have the same theme...trials and tribulation. With a good bit of madness in them. I love it! The characters go through hell only to come back the devil. You could literally call all of these stories the "Hell's Tribulation Series"!
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While reading the story I felt like the manner in which things were presented was rather familiar and lo and behold, it was because the author is the same one that wrote (writes) The Undead Legion. The pacing of the story is good and the world is built very interestingly, its quite refreshing to see a cultivation novel that's mixed right with magical fantasy, so many novels on this site fail to mix the two of them and end up leaning too heavily on either one of them by the half way point. The characters are fleshed out, some more so than others; I do have a rather small gripe with how easily the two main female characters changed their attitudes towards the MC. Especially Lissandra, I get what the author tried to convey by having her personality like that but the change was so sudden and drastic it made me roll my eyes. But its not to the point where it would ruin the story. The writing quality is decent. There's quite a few syntax and grammatical errors, the most egregious ones are during dialogues where the author uses the quotation marks for the start and end of a characters lines. He sometimes ends the dialogue too soon with the mark or too late breaking the flow of the story in some cases. You can tell this story was written around the same time The Undead Legion was written since the grammatical errors here are reminiscent of the first chapters of the other story. But his other story improved with time and if the author ever returns to this one it will most likely improve as well. For now I left only 3 stars in stability of updates since it seems like this story is on hiatus while he focuses on his main one. I do hope you one day return to this one.
Author!! If you want to get more readers you need to promote your LN. Go to Reddit and post your LN there and post the first 5 chapters there. Tell them what your LN is about and how many chapters there are and tell them where they can continue reading it. Then make posts on Webnovels forums and on other forums on the internet.
Love the story, truly refreshing compared to most cultivation novels that are so predictable. I enjoy the clear hierarchy in society that doesn't just change out of nowhere. The only thing I didn't enjoy as much was the MC's naive character, where he is beyond humble, more like having no confidence in his existence, as if he is below the lowest of servants even after helping nobles. I hope something happens so that his character will change, as I don't think I'll be able to go on if his excessive humbleness goes on for hundreds of chapters. Either way, great story.