Blind Mate for Alpha

Reveal spoiler

The progression of the story seems very forced and not natural at all and there is no backstory to the characters at all.

I only decide to read this as you read and voted on mine but.. As soon as I read your novel I was blown away on know the story line was and all I have to say is you have a talent just make sure not to stress your self other writing!! Loved your work hope to see more in the near future!!! :)

The reason why i gave such an low score is because you have just created one long ass text per chapter, come on, use more space... ...………………………..