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chibit
chibitLv1chibit

Hi thao, nice fan fic you’ve got here. Can’t wait to see how the bond between Itsuki and Naruto grows. As a naruto fan, I am very pleased with how you let their story unfold. Looking forward to reading this story.

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DiperZ
DiperZLv3DiperZ

Más apresurado que la mierda, en el capítulo 1 dice que como es ciego tiene que poder sentir el chakra más fácil, pero en el capítulo no te dicen si sintió el chakra etc. En el cap 2 ya podía hacer taijutsu fácilmente y se convirtió en el primero y en el tres está entrenando con Anbu una mierda

Towel_thebest
Towel_thebestLv1Towel_thebest

Author here on annother account- Sorry, Ive lost my account and cant remeber the password or webnovel is not working for me, ill just post this fanfic on this account or maybe drop it

Ruralbuddy_500
Ruralbuddy_500Lv4Ruralbuddy_500

interesting story so far can't wait for more. uwksbxhxksmzbxhdimsbxhxudjsnzbdhjdkamzbxhdimabxhxudjsjsnbxjxjsjsisksbxhxokabzhxizksnbd

crimsonitaci
crimsonitaciLv11crimsonitaci

cool cool concept haven't seen one before thos........................................................................................................................

BookWizard23412
BookWizard23412Lv2BookWizard23412

Very cool fan fiction. As for me of course not up to the Butterfly Uchiha. But compared to everything else it's beautiful

Rio_Bladimir
Rio_BladimirLv10Rio_Bladimir

Buena historia tiene fue una gran idea recordemos que Madara hizo picadillo a los 5 kages sin sus ojos así que es fantástico desarrollar los sentidos humanos asta ser capaz de combatir de manera sensorial sería una buena trama sobre las naturalezas del chacra bueno creo que tres bastan como principales

Taonsup
TaonsupLv4Taonsup

Uhhhhhh it’s me! Just the author shamelessly giving myself a 5 star review which I don’t deserve but I need my pride to be big so I’ll still be able to make chapters. Anyways enjoy and leave a comment! This will be the only time I’ll be saying this All characters except mine belong to Masashi Kishimoto, do not be discouraged though and continue reading!