Quade_The_Unknown
The writing quality is grate as always 5/5 Update Stability: Looks like a 5 but, the odds of a break by chapter 20-29 are high So 2/5 Story Development: You lack CREATIVITY In all your stories you follow the plot entirely. With Ichigos mom death it’s obvious this will be the same as the rest. 2/5 Character Design: You want the MC to be Jotaro not just in looks/design but, also in personality. Honestly would make more sence if you just called it Jotaro in Bleach. 1/5 World Background: It’s Bleach That’s basically all there is to it(fill in the blank your self) 2/5
Personally I really like it, the flow of the chapter is nice and the characters don't feel like robots and most importantly chapters are thicc.The onl minor issue I have is that it is following cannon currently but I don't mind as it is just the groundwork for te future and I hope to see more deviation from the Canon in future.👍👍👍
MC sin protagonismo, es escrito demasiado como un expectador, en lugar de colocarlo allí de esa forma donde no hace ningún aporte significativo, queriendo decir que el canon sigue igual, sería mejor describir la vida diaria del MC, su entrenamiento y desarrollo, dicho esto la personalidad del MC no tiene mucho atractivo cuando lo colocas en un género daily-life, su interacción con otros personajes es demasiado pálida al ser tan antipático.