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Black Market Merchant

KyleSullivanJr

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KyleSullivanJr
KyleSullivanJrLv14KyleSullivanJr

Authors Review and Tags List: Apocalypse, Action, Mechs, Female-CEO, Strong from the Start, Empire Building, Robots, Mixed Martial Arts, Merchant, Monsters, Futuristic Earth. If you are looking for Romance there will be some much later in the story. However, the story needs to progress to that point. Original had 160 chapters before being contracted, aiming for 1,000 chapter range. Please like this review so others can see the Tags!

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Dont_eat_my_tofu
Dont_eat_my_tofuLv10Dont_eat_my_tofu

Great work author!! The writting is very good and the use of descriptional words is spot on!! A very enthrallinf read and I recommend anyone who finds it interesting to read! And if you don’t well all I can say is that you’re missing out... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Gin_Tasogare
Gin_TasogareLv14Gin_Tasogare

From what I have read so far, I can tell that I will love this book. The characters all feel real and natural. While I don't know much about the entire state of the world, I am very interested to know it and how the main character will tie into it. I have been loving who the story is being written and like how the perspective changes between multiple characters. The book has been great and I hope to continue reading.

val_valery
val_valeryLv10val_valery

hewwo masta i like this one. keep up the good work (っ.❛ ᴗ ❛.)っ(っ.❛ ᴗ ❛.)っ(っ.❛ ᴗ ❛.)っ(っ.❛ ᴗ ❛.)っ(っ.❛ ᴗ ❛.)っ(っ.❛ ᴗ ❛.)っ(っ.❛ ᴗ ❛.)っ(っ.❛ ᴗ ❛.)っ

Jo_J
Jo_JLv13Jo_J

Just a few reflections after reading a few chapters; the story is interesting, your characters also, and first of all it's so nice to read a story that you don't have to put so much effort to understand what the author wanted to say. You don't struggle with the language so it's your advantage over the rest (non-English speakers), use it well! All the best!

Bethel_Gold
Bethel_GoldLv10Bethel_Gold

a female lead? wo! amazing am not done with the book yet and I can say truly this is a nicely written book. Your character development, grammar, the story.....it's all so amazing

BattleTracs
BattleTracsLv14BattleTracs

Great story development, both character and world. Grammer and spelling could use some work but overall is really good. Story catches the eye and is ocerall a great read.

Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

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JessicaShelton
JessicaSheltonLv13JessicaShelton

A very interesting novel, it gives descriptive details. The storyline is good. It's recommended to read this novel that not to be missed. 🤗

Ordenador
OrdenadorLv4Ordenador

Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! 💪💪

DemonsDescent
DemonsDescentLv2DemonsDescent

The story amd character development is excellent. The quality too is better than most and I like how the story proceeds. The only downside is, UPDATE MORE CHAPTERS AUTHOR!

Mary_Algen_Guiang1
Mary_Algen_Guiang1Lv13Mary_Algen_Guiang1

wow! an apocalyptic world and cyborg, villains crawling all over the violence infested world! this author knows what he is writing about! i love the story's concept which is so futuristic and scifi!

Daoist3FJQV7
Daoist3FJQV7Lv1Daoist3FJQV7

I absolutely love this, regardless of the fact that the author is a man, he saw it fit to place so much strength and prominence in the main character, a lady. I absolutely love this, your character development, your use of words, I love it all. kudos😁

itsjasonborn
itsjasonbornLv1itsjasonborn

A very very very veryyy unique concept for me! I really liked the characters, the plot, the world. I really liked everything. Hope you will get bigger.

Everythinger_Kumar
Everythinger_KumarLv1Everythinger_Kumar

For starters, I really liked your description and some of the words you’ve used there. The metaphors are really apt for where you’ve used them and it provides a great, detailed image of your imagination. One thing that most isekai or unrealistic plots face is that most people do not stick through till the end until they are rewarded with a good story lead / hook not to before nor too early into the story. I think you have found your sweet spot there. The dialogues of the characters are very well delivered with appropriate descriptions and actions. You haven’t given us too much nor too less and that is one great thing in your story. The action scene is depicted in a great way and is very descriptive while maintaining that sweet spot of yours. One thing I would advice is to not name the chapters as chapter # because that would appear repeated and wouldn’t look appealing to the eyes. Only thing you have to do is probably take the chapter # out and just keep the name of the chapter like for example (Chapter 1: Arrival). Otherwise, it’s a great story that you have written.

Nate_Quinn
Nate_QuinnLv4Nate_Quinn

whoa😮😯! i just started but I am in love with the story already. one of the reasons is I always wanted my mc to get into the action very early on but it couldn’t work. This story already teased to me, what could have been. well done author!

DelphineIU
DelphineIULv1DelphineIU

Wow! This book feels so realistic, even with the sci-fi going on all around it. I have read most parts of this story and honestly, I'm completely hooked! I love how you have a nice way with words and how you describe the characters, their environment and everything else with well-thought attention. I'm definitely reading more of this. Good job author.

Readingpanda
ReadingpandaLv2Readingpanda

Great Story as well as writing style with almost no visible grammatical or pronouncing mistakes. The story is well written with good background and about the female lead, she has a cool attitude and well-described personality moreover as a female lead written by a male author, he did a good job presenting the character.

Scriptamagina
ScriptamaginaLv10Scriptamagina

This novel deserves a five-star rate. But, for me, it's more than that. This is one of my favorites now. Oops yeah, I'm just saying the truth. I love the character of the MC she was so cool and I kind of admired her character. author,really? You made me inspired , how this girl deals with her life. Good job author.🥰🥰

OwariDa
OwariDaLv3OwariDa

I don't know if it's because I like really strong female protagonists, but ever since the first chapter, I was so hooked to the badass female main character that i almost forgot about the time replaying the scenes in my head while I read every moment. The characters are great, story telling is amazing that I wish I could do the same. And overall, very very good read!!