1 My Mate Part 1

This is my first book. Please give me some constructive feedback on this book.

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Lizzy

"Lizzy, Lizzy" called Adrien. Adrien is my bodyguard since my dad Bryce who is Alpha of the Blood Moon pack, My dad thinks I need protection although I can take care of myself

"Aghhh what Adrien!? " I growled as I pushed myself up from the bed to cold icey floor to get the door. I opened the door. Adrien stood there with a huge smile on his face "Lizzy your dad is calling you to the office its urgent" I slammed the door in his face because how dare he wake me up from peaceful slumber...ugh I hate it when people do that. "Tell him I'll come down, let me just get ready" I yelled in frustration from behind the door . I put on a light blue hoodie with black ripped jeans and white and black Addias shoes. I ran down the stairs and went into the office where my dad was with his beta Mark a beta is smaller than the Alpha so when there is a problem the Alpha is too busy to see to his beta takes over same applys to his third Jayden. I smelt a spicy yet soothing scent.

My wolf got happy and screamed

"Mate!! this is what you have been waiting for go find we mate". I opened the door and screamed "Mate"

Axel

I woke up in the morning and shifted into my wolf, my wolf is white in colour and has green eyes as I had a meeting with the Blood Moon pack as I was the Alpha of the Red Rising Moon pack. I love the pack don't get me wrong I just hate Zachary who is Bryces son i never meet the daughter as everytime I was there she was out with her friends. I ran for 3 hours before getting into my human form and into their territory. I went into the house and into the meeting room I smelt the most delitful smell of cotton candy and a cinimon it sent warm felling to my spine . My wolf got so excited and was screaming "Mate Mate!! " I then saw a beautiful girl with lovely wavy light brown kinda blonde hair that fell upon her lovely tan skin and hazel eyes. I jumped out of the chair and we both screamed "Mate"

Lizzy

I stopped and looked at who I screamed mate to it was..... Axel my brothers enemy...he had black beautiful that fell upon his pale skined forehead and lovely light green eyes. We were the opposites well what can I say opposites attract. What came out if my mouth was "we can't tell my brother" little did I know my brother was standing right behind me

Sorry for the cliffhanger but what can I say that's me 😂

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