I believe that this novel has a lot of potential I definitely recommend. If this writer stays consistent then we have a very promising novel on our hands
I’m loving how the the story isn’t being rushed. I think that’s the key to enjoying a good novel about an overpowered character. I love how much detail you put into explanations for the second chapter. I’m really looking forward to chapter 3
I this that that the character was make perfectly with a lot of room for development and the background information given on the world was very sufficient however I think you should work on the writing quality