Reviews of BIRTH OF THE DEVILISH CEO:SO WHAT IF I'M A LADY?
BIRTH OF THE DEVILISH CEO:SO WHAT IF I'M A LADY?
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This is fabulous.Wow! This story is damn good.I have seen many writers writing about how the ML always saves the FL from being drugged but this is my first time of reading how the FL automatically saves the ML from being drugged.You know what if there is anyway that I could have a thousand power stone I would gladly get it so that I would used it to vote for your story so that everyone could see how extremely talented you are.
The story is fabulous so far.And I really really enjoy reading this novel.The storyline is amazing.You know in all of the novels that I have read so far,the FL are always bullied but that is not the case in this particular novel.In this novel the FL has a strong personality.And she also learnt martial arts.it's refreshing to read.I'm rootingπππππ for you author.Don't be discouraged.
The Author needs to improove a loooooooot of things. First of all the writing quality. The author tends to specify every single thing everytime. For examble: when the first villain sent assassin to kill FL and was waiting for their news she says "Where are those bastards that I sent to kill that ***** that humiliated me at the bar" or something, I think it was enough to say "Why aren't they back yet?" Sometimes it's better to not specify everything and leave the rest for the readers to assume. It gives a book a certain degree of charm. The story development is horrible, it seem a shopping list interspersed with stiff and unnatural dialogues and some random thoughts and bootlickings of side characters. The character design is not existing, when the Author introduces a knew character she never gave a basic explanation on them. The Author always says that the FL is self-confident and cold after what happened in the past, but I think she is too full of herself. Someone who had a difficult past should be cautious and never lose her temper. Another thing that I didn't like is that the ML and his friends treat the FL and her friend like some cheap pr**titutes on their second encounter. The FL is SECOND to the ML both in martial arts and wealth. The Author should learn to put oneself in the characters' shoes and describe what they are feeling accordingly. In fact in this book almost no space for the character's thoughts, something superimportant for readers to empathize with the characters. The world background is also almost not existing. Rarely the Author describes where the events are set, this is also really important for the readers to blend in the book. If you are the Author please don't take offence from my review, as I said in the first comment I quite like your point of view of love, so I started this book with positive feelings. All I said was to help you grow up as a writer. Hope my review was helpful to you.
the dialogue and narration style is too bad in this novel. amatuer dialogue will kill your interest. an expert fighter FL gives a full page of dialogue near bathroom while being molested by a filthy womanizer and waits for him to loose her wrist. while the bastard try to kiss her and held her engaging in filthy and nonsense dialogue. there are so many such instances where you will vomit reading stupid dialogue.
Wow! Awesomely interesting storyline. Finally.. we have a no-nonsense sassy Female Lead who is strong, deadly and can protect herself too. She even gets an opportunity to save the Male Lead. Love the sparks between the two leads. Still reading this novel. Can't wait to see how she conquers him 101%. [img=recommend]
I believe first three chapters determine the faith of the novel but this book captured me from first chapter instead. I was too bored with FL who are a bit weak despite being smart and witty.. this book introduced me a FL that was vicious, efficient, skillful and not below the ML in any way....must read...i
Plot looked really promising. I started reading but the narration and writing quality kept going down. There were too many grammatical errors and sudden changes of narration that made it hard to make sense of what was going on. And that makes for a bad reading experience. Suggesting the author to get an experienced editor as there is pretty good potential in the plot.
Wow!your story is fabulous.How can that stupid girl(Feng Xin'er )lay her filthy and disgusting hands on our precious FL face.I feel like strangling her to dead too but who is Xiao Bai to the FL.I think our FL likes and listens to her very well. I bet that Feng Xin 'er's fiancΓ© was ogling over our FL superior beauty.πππππππ