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BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

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Drifting_feathers
Drifting_feathersLv3Drifting_feathers

can anyone tell me what this ESIGMAD1 and other ranks like this means what is the proper order of these ranks

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Reece_McEvoy
Reece_McEvoyLv14Reece_McEvoy

I’m really liking this novel so far, the power system is quite good, and the supercomputer brain AI is a nice take, however the constant change of POV is the only downfall… the back and forth between MC and the military is really jarring, and I end up skipping most of the military chapters because there’s no incentive to care what’s happening to these irrelevant side characters. I’ll keep reading in hopes it gets better as I’m only on chapter 200

luminuspaladin
luminuspaladinLv14luminuspaladin

Love the story but for the love god dear author can you move the fights faster cause I’m reading the chase chapters and it feels like the fights has been going on for a week. Other than that great story.

777arks777an_RGM
777arks777an_RGMLv13777arks777an_RGM

Writing quality is above average, story development is predictable and there was some plothole probably to rewrite, character design is meh because not choosing intelligence since this world INT also equal to IQ, supposedly slowed down enemy movement and increased thought process to do multiple spells at once... but dexterity...makes him have faster thought process which is illogical...the stat to real life application is bad... if MC become genius because INT is high then i might quit.

AFJDS
AFJDSLv12AFJDS

The story is good. The only problem is that the MC is really really really really unlikable. He’s dumb, arrogant, he has an extremely short fuse, he is not creative, he is not brave (though not specially cowardly) and half the character development goes something like this: “Uh, I didn’t blow up over some trash talk, I grew up as a person.” 5min later… tries to start a fistfight and insults a dozen people over one disrespectful comment. And finally in one of the last chapters he goes all “woe is me” mixed with a “me against the world” mentality and goes all edgy, though idk if it was another temper tantrum or if he is like this now. Sorry had to vent.

Columbusohio
ColumbusohioLv11Columbusohio

Reveal spoiler

svedlr
svedlrLv11svedlr

Brain Crystal Power Strengthening (Allows the gaining of the energy attribute points) does it add energy attributes if he consume brain crystals or consume the DNA of a thaid?? also how do people in that world become stronger? by consuming pills or something? or they just level up as they grow up? it's kinda confusing and the story is super slow.. his system is not use at its maximum.. like he can just go to the library and copy important knowledge or let the system dig in the internet information of anything that can make him stronger

drotis
drotisLv15drotis

a wonderful story with amazing potential and a great plot, I'm only around chapter 100 right now but as far as I can tell it is gold. keep up the good work

Adil_Hensley
Adil_HensleyLv11Adil_Hensley

What I really like about this book is that the author constantly fixes the previous chapters, not only to remove plot holes but also to improve the characters, the lore, and any kind of mistake. There are not many authors out there who work this much and give this much dedication to their work.

Shehroz
ShehrozLv13Shehroz

The overall story is unique. The MC is also likable. The story progression is very slow, the MC is still in school arc after 30 chapters which are 1000+ words long. Too much extra info dump. Characters are just average. Writing quality is brilliant.

antmanFN
antmanFNLv13antmanFN

a lot of minor spelling mistakes but it dosent ruin the story at all i really enjoyed reading this story though i did have a lot of questions like if the system is A scientific AI then where is it getting the exp from and why dosent it give the mc and unlimited amount basically i just wanted a answer and i wih the mc abused his system more he can download any information from the internet in his head should've already downloaded every martial art and science book he could and monster encyclopedia so he could know their weaknesses as well and he can learn human pressure points their so much potential that he's wasting but i really did enjoy this story i recommend every to try to read up to chapter 40

ricolow
ricolowLv15ricolow

Some grammatical errors that kinda ruin the immersion, but other than that it is a solid novel that is definitely worth the read.

NyxReveuse
NyxReveuseLv2NyxReveuse

Firstly, awesome book cover, I loved it from the very minute I saw it ^^ Secondly, the writing quality was absolutely marvelous and it made it even more fun to read the novel~ The MC's character is quite interesting so fantastic job Author! I can't wait to see the upcoming chapters! [img=recommend][img=update]

7Penguin_pOpsickle
7Penguin_pOpsickleLv137Penguin_pOpsickle

A nice story, character design and depth are good 🐧

Amin_Z
Amin_ZLv4Amin_Z

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Jesus_Valdez_4349
Jesus_Valdez_4349Lv14Jesus_Valdez_4349

good story by quick question how do I view auxiliary volumes on my phone

Aceron
AceronLv15Aceron

While the story is interesting and the premise is good, it has very little editing which makes it difficult to read. Additionally, while the author does take feedback, which is easy to notice after reading 200+ chapters, the older chapter are a mess and require significant rewrite. Essentially, while there is definitely improvement in the writing style, there are very few people that will be able to reach that point before giving up, which is the main reason this story will never see the top lists. For example, the other switches between story-lines between several chapters and you lose focus on their main character, while being forced to focus on characters the readers just aren't able to connect with because they disappear within a few chapter and have very little connection to the main story. While it was fixed, it still remains as a part of the story and is very difficult to gloss over. The only advise I can give to the author a complete rewrite for the first 200 chapters with serious editing and removal of filler chapters.

CHAOS_FOOLISH
CHAOS_FOOLISHLv11CHAOS_FOOLISH

Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know how many girls are currently in the harem, and if there are any yanderes... please answer me.

Mr_HonestReview
Mr_HonestReviewLv3Mr_HonestReview

It was good but too many POVs, It would be great if the author focuses only on mc or 3-5 side characters pov. Multiple characters made the novel's arc unnecessary longer.

DaoistjID7yj
DaoistjID7yjLv4DaoistjID7yj

Hello Author, The grammar quality is good enough to read without issue but the problem is when people are in conversation no emotions conveyed at many or almost all chapters like for example if Eric speaks or his friends speaks they just say like amber said-----eric said------bro please write the emotion by which they are speaking like if they smiling while speaking or indifferently or coldly oe sadly like anything bro please just add the emotion just because of this i had to drop this 3 times then again continue after sometimes of there are any improvements.please author do improve it.Yours loyal reader.