PilgrimJagger
let's get a general overview. the story is set in a futuristic world with flying cars, robots, and advanced technology. in this world, everyone has a brain crystal that gives them superpowers. our young protagonist, Erik is a bullied student with an F rank power who discovers a system that turns his life around. the world building is intricate to say the least. Pilgrim doesn't spare any effort when It comes to descriptions and paints a vivid image of the background in your head. his words flow together beautifully. the story starts out nice and slow, it doesn't rush the reader nor is it stressful on them. not much can be said about it as of now, it's still a bit early, but there are some rather exciting upcoming arcs which I'm looking forward to. updating stability is excellent too, a solid two chapters everyday. i would say Pilgrim's writing style could use a bit of work though, so could his character design. we'll certainly see improvements in the future. all in all a 10/10 for system lovers, if you're not reading, then i don't know what you're doing :3
Firstly, awesome book cover, I loved it from the very minute I saw it ^^ Secondly, the writing quality was absolutely marvelous and it made it even more fun to read the novel~ The MC's character is quite interesting so fantastic job Author! I can't wait to see the upcoming chapters! [img=recommend][img=update]
a lot of minor spelling mistakes but it dosent ruin the story at all i really enjoyed reading this story though i did have a lot of questions like if the system is A scientific AI then where is it getting the exp from and why dosent it give the mc and unlimited amount basically i just wanted a answer and i wih the mc abused his system more he can download any information from the internet in his head should've already downloaded every martial art and science book he could and monster encyclopedia so he could know their weaknesses as well and he can learn human pressure points their so much potential that he's wasting but i really did enjoy this story i recommend every to try to read up to chapter 40
This one got me really hooked, the development of Erik, the background and others, it's all interesting and am so into it! Although if there's a minor problem it would be the lack of new characters, i think the author should continue adding a few interesting side characters that will be close to MC, (the bullies are too 2d to my liking) i get a bit bored and somewhat depressed when its only the MC, that's why am recommending this. Afterall a story is all about the life of a main character and even in real life there's always that one moment we have a person or people by our side! Either ways, interesting story, good job author! I'll be sure to read on! Adios~