AnnaShannel_Lin
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This is a hidden gem. It is a really refreshing story that has a strong FL, a stubborn ML that is changing, and many mysteries to be solved (particularly, about who is it pulling the strings in the shadows). Writing Quality: There are very minor grammatical errors and it's so negligible that you wouldn't notice them. The quality is high, and the manner in which the Author manages to bring you within its story through her words is breathtaking. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. Story Development: Very well paced. Not too slow or too fast. The way the Author weaves the plots and reveals the stuff bit by bit is intringuing indeed. It's far beyond the typical cliche type of plot and storyline, and for those that are similar (you know, there has to be that childhood friend/lover that clings etc), the Author manages to still make it interesting and fresh. Character Design: This is the best part of the whole novel. You can see how the MCs change and develop, especially the ML. The FL has gone through a drastic change in personality, so you don't really see the progress from the meek to the strong but you do clap your hands in glee when you see how she stands up for herself. I love how these characters develop and can't wait for more to be revealed. World Background: It's set in modern Earth, so there's not much 'world background' to speak of. However, the setting is described well, and the whole concept and plot are well written. All the best, Author! Will definitely recommend this to my readers as well.
I hope Avery or Robert caught up soon this evil bodyguard to red handed he following Diana command..... And missing oil in the drink of Evan how dare he hit Avery cut his leg and tongue off and I think this killers send by Charles....... I want to see Avery how cruel her Charles was... She has given the life of Satan and evil soul..... She will regret soon... Why she is choose to Charles to her friend be with..... Anyways I mean happy for Evan and Avery finally they are together.......
Wow..... ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐awesome๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉthat's what I want from Avery character......... Why she didn't does the same thing in the past... If she strong enough like this this things will never could happened.... Anyways I happy... To see her like this.... I want her to prove Diana scheme to Mrs. Howels.... I like her awesome entry like this..... I hope we will see more chapter like this in the future..... I only want to both protagonists to become most strong couple..... And fight together from enemies..... I waited so long for Avery to fight back like this.
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